Not my usual read... but it should be!
I am really enjoying reading this so far, and I can't wait to read some more! I have to stop for now because I have plans that mean I've got to leave my house (I know, it's a tragic time for me), but I am so excited to see where you take the story as I continue to read more! I wanted to write a review now because I already have some thoughts that will hopefully be helpful.
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You have a great writing style when it comes to plot twists/cliffhangers. You have used them in basically every chapter so far and it honestly just makes me want to keep on reading (boo for having to leave my house). But you should be careful with your use of repetition. Sometimes you repeat the same word or phrase within the same paragraph or even sentence. Obviously, this is sometimes necessary. But when reading through your work so far I noticed a few examples where you could use synonyms to add variety to your writing. Also, be careful with your use of tenses - sometimes you have a habit of changing tense within the same paragraph when it really isn't necessary.
Luckily though, these are things that are easy to fix! So I wouldn't worry about them at all.
Like I said earlier, I can't wait to read the rest over the coming weeks and get to learn more of the secrets I know you'll be hiding at the end of every chapter.
Keep up the great work, Jae!