Jaison Arbor

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Highly conversed

The start was normal but that's not a bad thing, the plot is somewhat good, one thing that I noticed is that you have mistaken some past sentences with the present though it can be corrected, one more thing was that the chapter was highly conversed and had more of a dragging, the surroundings didn't have any explanation as it should but hey you can always correct it, I enjoyed the synopsis so I have a feeling that the story further will be good ^-^

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Verity

I could feel the belief of the author's mind in all that has been written, I would like to write something here about life for those who may read this and help themselves to get out of their nightmare "life isn't fair it's a belief to many, life is fair, it's all in your mind, don't let yourself be a victim, you are not a victim, you are more than that and it isn't worthy of your time to play the victims and blame the unfairness of life, come out of the delusional puddle and see that life is fair and you are not a victim, just hustle hard and you'll see it making all sense together."
Hey author I could get why you write this poem book, and I felt you, the book is really good and has a sense of truth to it, I hope you'll get the goal of helping others through your poems ^-^, I'm giving you a gift on your wall, check it.

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Unique

One thing is for sure and that is the plot is decent and interesting, I loved how the author described everything so vividly, the characters seem pretty fun too, and the way the author released the women from shackles was very unique.

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