Jamie Tullis

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Better than expected!

This is the first full story I've read on this site, and I'm impressed! The story kept me tied in and I read it during several class periods when I should've been listening. I liked seeing little innocent Cindy turn evil, and I especially liked seeing the "charming" prince show his true, sinister colors. It kept me thoroughly entertained throughout the whole thing. I love the "show, not tell" writing style in her emotions and surroundings and how well the dependency on her magic was written. Well done!

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THIS IS WHY I CAME TO THIS SITE

THIS IS THE QUALITY CONTENT I LOVE
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KEEP IT UP
(In all seriousness good job)

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