Liz Villanueve

Weaver of tales from the Pacific.

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A riveting page-turner

Native legends, badass women, and a reality show gone wrong. You got it all here. The blurb really got me hooked at first. With the right suspense and witty dialogues, I love the overall plot and the legends mentioned - well-researched and true to its heart. I'm always interested with the Native Americans particularly the Navajos and their WWII code talkers. So, when I added this book in my TBR, I knew I won't be disappointed. You deserve a five star rating, dear author. :)

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Superpowers and secret identities

I like the premise of the story. It's a mix of Alexandra Bracken & Cassandra Clare's worlds. Though improvement in dialogue writing needs to be done, and I think some chapters are lengthy if you're aiming for a first POV. Overall, the supernatural elements and the Asian heritage hooked me in to the story. Excited to see more action and stories from you. :)

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RPG-inspired fantasy adventure

Overall, I found this story interesting. It has a linear plotting and it wasn't bad either because the world unfolds itself chapter by chapter; and surprising twists (especially at the ending, so better watch out). My only main concern is the technical writing. It needs more improvement as of now. All in all, you've got an amazing story here, a weapons-master and a girl as a weapon (who, I hope, would be his love interest in the next chapters).
Keep up the good work. :)

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Quirky and comical

I love it! The mythological references and action-packed scenes. Seriously, this story is fresh but a good one. Recommending this to Percy Jackson fans. ❤

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