Jasinda Black

Wattpad account; ClashOfClansGrl - do not go there lest you be buried in fandoms/random events from my life. My potato llama wife from Pluto brought me here. Updates on weekends OwO

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Love it!

I love the book so far, there could be a little more emotion in the way Ceres writes, she seems a little emotionless to me, and your grammar could use a few tiny tweaks, but this is only based off of the first six chapters. The way you tell the story is definitely unique, and I love it, I've read very few books written like a diary, and I read a lot thanks to my school's curriculum, and it's decently helpful how you explain the events before the chapter in a short sentence. I'd say this is going to make a great RomCom! Keep up the good work! :3

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Came from the depths of Wattpad

I've finished Vampire's Pet and I've been waiting on updates to Prey, and Love and Loss, but there's always been one thing common is any Wattpad book and that's grammar. Normally on paper, grammar bothers me a lot, but digitally I tend to correct it on my own, I would suggest getting Grammarly to fix that. Otherwise, I have enjoyed every twist and turn in the book, and I'm excited for the next updates.

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