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I LOVE YOU SM

I´ll just be honest, as I started the chapter, I felt as if I were winded. You established the vague setting and then introduced the main problem of the chapter. But not just that, but you made it sink. Because it was one of those openings that makes your heart sink, your eyebrows furrow, and have to look right back over what was just written just to feel that again. Essentially, the way you write is nearly enchanting and is so well structured. Can´t wait to see more...

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Wow!

Just for starters, this was amazing.

The letter format mixed with everyday dialogue really did move the plot along at a steady pace. The characters were crafted so beautifully. Each with depth and true, human attributes. I´ve always had a thing for accurate, proportional characters. As we´re starved of them in the world of literature. It´s only the good books, the ones that have you staying up all night binging, that have those kinds of characters. Thank you so much for allowing me to enjoy your work.

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