HeyOOzz!😆 (finally got the time to write the review Hahaha) Firstly, wanted to say a massive thanks for writing this book which is truly exhilarating! Surely one of the most elegant and polished pieces of work I have ever seen in a long time! Couple that with an intriguing storyline and I see all the elements perfectly laid out for a great read! You’re indeed a talented writer and this book is a testament to it!😊
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You started off with a hooking introduction, describing the miserable state of Raven with her brother in a terrible condition and honestly, it touched right my heartstrings straight away! Though I found using the perspective of a cat to set the opening scene quite unique which not many would have thought of, I felt it was just a tad unrealistic that the cat had an exceptional level of maturity in thinking (I guess it’s just me but anyways HAHA)! Anyways apart from that, the story did kick off well afterwards with the introduction of the other characters and their circumstances. Perhaps the biggest thing which made me captivated was how well you gelled artistic elements and cats very well into the plot itself. It seemed that you’ve placed equal emphasis on the personalities of cat just as much as the other characters. This explicitly shows how important they are to the story as well! Personally, I felt their presence heartwarming as they added the extra element of liveliness in each chapter. Not to mention the way you used colours to convey different tones, emotions and thoughts truly made the story mode vibrant and added depth to your story development as well. I particularly enjoyed the romantic scenes (cause I love romance HAHA). Another great point was how you took your time to slowly build up on the scenes rather than hastily move on which I felt was very realistic!
Where you shine the brightest is through your language! I guess you have a natural flair for writing and that’s your biggest strength. The writing style you possess is truly sophisticated. Your descriptions are very vivid and elegant, written in a manner which flows well! Your choice of words were apt mostly and I liked how you didn’t use overly bombastic words in your work! Just plain simple English words but the exceptional writing style did the job by beautifying the work! There was a clear attempt at diversifying sentence structures which prevented the work from being monotonous! Dialogues were mostly smooth and were critical in character development as well. While I admired the use of the Japanese, Italian and Spanish words which pretty much elevated the authenticity, I just felt it was overused by including it almost all chapters! (Also after a while, it gets tiring to keep on flipping up and down between the definition and the chapter HAHA) Personally, I feel less is more hehe! I found your quotes at the beginning of each chapter intriguing but I wasn’t sure whether they were put to make the work more aesthetic or they somehow had a link to the chapter! (I guess I’m just dumb HAHAH) but it did capture my attention! As far as I read, there weren’t major spelling or grammatical mistakes so kudos on that!
Overall, I felt it was an incredible work, a nearly flawless piece of writing!😆 Your writing skills are well above expectations and it is a really good sign of a great writer in the making! On a personal note, I just wanted to say a big thanks cause you were one of the writers whom I was inspired from to continue writing stories and I will be always grateful for your in-depth review of my book (Closely Distant)! Keep igniting the passion of writing and inspiring many more! Cheers from the pancake boy! XDD 🥞🥞🥞