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Enthralling

I loved this novel, it has a really good plot which is well-thought out and developed at a natural pace. The protagonist was engaging and interesting, with a lot of personality, and every character had their own unique traits which singled them out and made the story that much better. I love romance and this story certainly didn't disappoint - I was expecting it to be more of a cliché but it was a lot better than that; I've never read anything quite like it. The only criticism I have is that the grammar wasn't brilliant, but that can be easily fixed! If this story got an editor, and was a little more developed, it could easily become a published bestseller!

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