Jesse David Escalera

Austin

During troublesome times when I've felt alone, writing has given me someone to call my friend.

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Touching

Understanding ones Perspective is truly a virtue.

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You have what it takes.

Overall I enjoyed the story. You mentioned this is your first crack at writing.

I myself have learned some easy tricks that are helping me with writing: Read every sentence aloud. You'll catch missing words and wrong tenses, readily. When you read silently, your brain skips over the missing words and fills them in for you. Like an iPhone autocorrecting. But if you read it aloud your brain can't interfere and you'll catch your mistakes.

Just keep writing and join other platforms where they can critique your work. I know it's extremely difficult to hear someone else's input; however, it will help you become a better writer.

Hope this helps.

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Intrigued

I am already intrigued by the way you've articulated the characters in your story. It's not too often a love grabs my attention, I'm happy that I've crossed your path.

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Inspirational

I am deeply moved by this story. Although, it’s a fictional book it was able to capture the beauty and essence of love. Love has no boundaries

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Wow

Reading the first three paragraphs, I instantly fell in love with your style of writing. I placing this on my must read it all list... So far, I like what I am reading. .

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