JDlawyer

Hello, I'm an Author, Artist, brother, and son. I've many other stories yet to be written. And they all will look good on movies 🎥👌👏 #thriller #comedy #slice of life #Fiction 🫂👣🧠❤

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You need to add their names more frequently

Book review, stablish age of the character, at the beginning I wasn't sure what age she was or when she was presented older. By the way bad boys are reserving their judgment because they don't want people thinking they are other than cool. Her mom hitting her 4723 times sounds unrealistic since 1000 times would take hours, and that is 20 hits per minute, just some math. There's some minor grammar mistakes. Overall the story is okay 👌

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