JDlawyer

Hello, I'm an Author, Artist, brother, and son. I've many other stories yet to be written. And they all will look good on movies 🎥👌👏 #thriller #comedy #slice of life #Fiction 🫂👣🧠❤

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Well grammar

I did found out your grammar was almost flawless, but I did catch a word in the third chapter that's mispronounced the word seat should be sit.

Story wise, it's really great concept. Can't say much because I need more chapters and get to the climax to really dig it(get it I said dig🙂)

Keep going and make it better.

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