Jenny Armstrong

I love writing it helps me relax, I was born with a slight brain injury, and work with a friend who is an author and wildlife artist. I love life its such a precious gift

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A Great Start

I found the story riveting, in that I was laughing one moment yet transfixed in wondering what was about to happen next. This story could develop into a very interesting and exciting novel, which once you start to read, you will not want to put down.

Please, can I ask for you to continue and express your heart in your work, you have a great imagination and I truly would like to read this book

Keep Writing. I love your work

Regards Jenny

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GREAT READS

Oh, why did the book have to come to an end, only 14 chapters, Arr I cry out in frustration, I wanted it to continue.

A great read, super imagination, and I enjoyed your style​. PLEASE, please write more.
Regards Jenny

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good reads

Again in part, this disturbed me, far to much is written on suicide and growing up in modern society. As a teenager going through hormonal changes, my generation suffered like all others, yet very few expressed such thoughts so openly. Possibly it is me and life passes me by.

I understand the expression of one's feelings requires a release, and at which point do we draw the line.
Excellent​ work and expressive for that I give a stronger rating, Regards Jenny.

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I remember leaving childhood behind and the process of becoming an adult, it was a bitch, yet strange as it might seem life is a gift and we learn the true meaning of love. I actually related and understood the heart expressed feelings, brave and important. Keep writing.

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Fun reads

I thought I might be letting myself in for an unusual read, the storyline was good, although like me you struggle with grammatical errors, the work could benefit from becoming more presentable, and I noticed there were two or three line spaces at times. That said, I kind of enjoyed the novel, just a bit strong even for me and I write about adult consensual role-playing, bondage, fetish, and sexual torture consensual of course.

Still a great piece of work and once I get my mind back, I will read more of your work, please keep writing.

Regards Jenny.

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Good Reads

Ruth, I smiled and​ enjoyed this play with words and how your mind works. Please continue to write, you made me smile and laugh, for that I thank you.
Regards Jenny.

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Berst Reads

To date the best story I have read, truly a talented writer, please never stop writing​.
Regards Jenny.

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Good Reads

I enjoyed the story and would have liked to read more, it could be developed and go far, your imagination and use of words painted an interesting picture within my mind, and I could envisage it before me.
Please keep writing. Regards Jenny.

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good reads

This story needs to be finished, as it has potential and is an exciting storyline and approach. Please, please write more you have talent, never give up writing it is a way of expressing your heart and developing the mind.
Regards Jenny.​

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promising reads

The story has potential and could go far; you need to build on your storyline and develop the characters, also considering the Inkitt breaks it looks so much more presentable. I believe you have talent, develop it and write, never stop writing, I try to write between 5,000 and 10,000 words a day (when I write that is) as for me it is also essential to have time off and read other peoples work.
Regards ​Jenny

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GREAT READ

Oh, my gosh, awesome and more, I am in shock, well of a sort, as it was disturbing, yet, so well written, a great story and Oh what an imagination, I did not want to put the book away and was up at 04 am reading until the end. Please consider writing more as you have great talent. I have some thirty plus novels to my name, ​and this one is by far the best I have read.
Regards Jenny.

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weird to my taste, yet, some might find it entertaining, although I like the imagination, please continue writing.
Regards Jenny

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I hope you never give up writing, you have a beautiful mind and continue please to express those thoughts into written​ words.
Regards Jenny

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Beth, you have a gift, please develop it further and write more. If you do the imagination will grow and new ideas take root. Your story was strong enough to hold my interest, yet failed to enthrall me. That said I would truly read more of your work in the future, so keep writing, great potential awaits.
Regards Jenny.

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sad reads

This disturbed me, having a friend who committed suicide and another brutally murdered, I found these words haunting and upsetting. Try looking at life, as a gift.
Regards Jenny

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Please, can I asked that you write more, you caught my interest and enjoyed the way your mind worked, expressing feelings, thoughts and life. All of which presents​ such a challenge. writing for me can enlighten the soul, and I believe your work could do the same for others.
Regards Jenny.

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I smiled and loved the expressive way you painted a picture in my mind, one which​ took to a life within and flew to my heart. Thank you.
Please keep writing. Regards Jenny.

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I wanted to give five stars for all as the work expressed so much love and made me smile, yet I held back, Why? as I wish to encourage you to write more, never stop expressing so much love.
Regards Jenny.

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I have come to look forward and to discover those words of magic, keep writing. Regards Jenny

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Such a beautiful mind to express your heart so clearly, keep writing. Regards Jenny.

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Great Read

I found myself amused and smiling, thank you, I actually enjoyed that, especially with the kids growing so fast, (If only) Life is such a precious gift and you brought that across, again thank you. Please, please continue writing, especially if it makes me and others smile.
Regards Jenny.

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Great Reads

I upped​ this to a great read, as it is expressing your own heart and touching mine as well as so many others. Wonderful, PLEASE, please keep writing. Regards Jenny

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I understand there is a following for this type of expressive poetry, however, it was not to my taste, that said, you were brave to openly release your thoughts to the world, few will be shocked by it but some will find enjoyment and pleasure, so for those I have rated two 4s and two 3s.,

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good reads

I find myself not wanting to give a negative review, yet I feel it needed more heart and effort, and as such, I found myself wanting to hear more, much more, there is potential and dreams can be reached. Keep writing.

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I enjoyed this and had wanted to read more, it has amazing potential as a novel and could be developed, keep writing.

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I felt there was talent to be found, yet your style confused me.

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Please write more.

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It took time, yet the world of poetry is changing, as is art and life itself, interesting style, and yes I would read more.

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Why so few poems, you have talent and I would have enjoyed reading more. Thank you, for publishing them, and please continue, life is such a precious gift and your work enlightens it even further. Regards Jenny.

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Loraine, we have not met, yet I feel your heart reaching out, Your Angel is there waiting, I found writing helped me so much, I suffered a breakdown from emotional pain and abuse. Writing helped to change my life, let it do the same for you. Keep writing such beautiful thoughts and words.
Regards Jenny.

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