Jessica Duckworth

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Captivating tale

From the very beginning, I found myself attached to the characters, and the scenes in which they are placed are detailed and easily imagined. And let's not forget the plot. Crafted to leave the reader beyond curious, it draws you in, and won't let you go. Love it! Great job!

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Good Start

This is a great story so far! I love the characters and the plot. The first few chapters were very well written and edited, but the more recent ones could use a lot more editing to avoId gramtIcal and punctuation errors. Sometimes the plot doesn’t entirely make sense— like characters make decisions more because of plot convenience than personality. That could be worked out. But the idea is good! Keep writing! :)

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