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Water

This was an interesting start. I'm not sure where this story will go but I'm intrigued. I really suggest adding more to the story - add some descriptions, explain how your character feels so it's not so short. As a reader I feel a disconnect. Right now this is a good outline and it's up to you to bulk it up with descriptions and emotions!

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Interesting story!

I really liked the concept of this story and the first chapter featuring births, I thought it was a good introduction. However, I did notice some issues with you using past and present tense in the same chapter. While reading, I didn't pick up on any spelling mistakes and the story seemed to flow well so overall good job on your first few chapters!

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