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Grammar and P.O.V.

I honestly think this could of been a really good book. But, the grammar is terrible and it keeps jumping to a different p.o.v. You kinda have to guess who it is. It changes like, every three paragraphs! The idea of the story is really good, but because of the grammar and p.o.v., I don't really want to read it. It hurts my head.

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ADDICTING!!!!!

Such a good book!!! I couldn't stop reading! The first and second books are soooo good! I can't wait for the new updates.
Although the book was so good, there were a few typos and misspelled words. I usually could figure out what it was supposed to say, but I would of preferred if they weren't there. But, totally good and it doesn't seem to bother me too much.
Michelle Torlot has done SUCH A GOOD JOB on this book. She always adds in plot twists and always catches me off guard. My family and friends probably think I am really weird because I keep yelling how good it is a randomly screaming "It all makes sense!", then one chapter me yelling "Wait-WHAT!!!!!".
All in all, if you haven't read this book, or the first one, you NEED to! It is soooo good and you will be addicted just like I am.

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