Very interesting Beginning
Stories involving mafia/organized crime are always very interesting, and this one is no different. It's a very dark story with a dark lead, as expected, but I would personally love even more background on him and what led him to do such violent acts. Obviously he's been trained up in this lifestyle, but I just love hearing more about what makes a character into what they are. Still, we get bits and pieces and it's very interesting to follow!
Read the story now
My only suggestion would be to fix the first two chapters- or the intro and prologue I think they are. Making more paragraphs so it's not a massive block of text to read will make it easier for readers! And there are some grammatical errors throughout, but a quick comb over the chapters can clean that up. Otherwise I believe there's a lot of good story fuel here and I'm excited to see what happens. Well done!