Utterly wholesome; it'll make your day!
I am in love with the characters and the unforgettable interactions between them. This story is lighthearted and fun, something that can bring a smile to your face no problem while addressing the pains of constantly trying to live up to harsh parental expectations. The descriptions are also beautiful and you'll find yourself longing to hop through the screen to embrace the setting. I find it difficult to choose a favourite character because I'm gravitating toward them all.
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There were some mistakes throughout that could be easily fixed with editing. The dialogue tends to rely on the personalities and speech patterns of the characters rather than attributions to immediately know who's talking, and while I did get confused at times as to who's saying what, it was mostly straightforward. It goes to show how well each character is established, so bravo to that!
Overall, would I recommend this story to others? Yes! Definitely! It'll take your emotions for a ride and won't leave you disappointed.