Very Rare and Intriguing
Now, here I was going to get ready to spam your chapters comment section with what I found personally confusing or something I wanted to point out. But I am flabbergasted, this book was a lot more than I was expecting! I could not find even a single thing I found wrong.
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First; I want to congratulate you for writing one heck of a masterpiece! This book is a very rare one of a kind story.
Secondly, I love the quotes you threw in at the beginning parts of your chapters, I love it when an author does that, and you chose the exact right ones for each part.
I love how you put the copyrights in to make sure nobody takes your work and adapts in on their own, smart.
Third, there is so much character information and development it was hard not to get sucked into this story. It was cute, there was some humor and so many moments that made me squeal and smile. This story is really rare, a cute story that blooms, I at first thought it would be really slow, but that's the characters emotional moments and part of the story.
There isn't too many stories I read that are really good and rare, but these rare books in my opinion are apart of the best books I've read in my life. Granted, this is not a fantasy magical story, but it is a love story with a calming feeling to it, it was sweet and it made me smile a lot.
The story placement, writing style and plot are all amazing, the writing technique in this story is amazing and very shocking, it made everything so much easier to imagine and be placed in the story, you did an amazing job presenting the story to the audience.
I really hope you update soon, the story ended abruptly and I know it's still ongoing, but I'm really excited to see what else this author will come up with!