Juli

Dark and Thrilling!

Loving this story!
It’s dark, scary, mature, and gruesome. It has everything that a horror story should have. The author has clearly planed this out carefully. The characters are enigmatic and each character has their own personality. Good job.
I recommend it for those who like a good dark book.

Exciting!

The concept of this book is original and interesting. The author does a great job in keeping the reader informed and the interactions between the characters are natural.

Can’t wait to see where this goes. Good job author! I shall stick around to read it until the end.

Brilliant

The author planned this story throughout. I felt the characters emotions and I’m glad I got to read such a good story. Original and beautiful, well done.

Lovely story

This story was romantic and cute!
I loved this couple, Mary and Honey had some underlying insecurities and I admire how the author was able to put them on display, and how the author managed to make the couple sort out their own issues through communication. It's a short story but it keeps the reader entertained.

Wonderful! 5 STARS

Very good

I enjoyed this story! It was certainty something new and fresh, and I recommended to anyone who wants to read something different from the usual books.
However, the only suggestion I have is to use italics when expressing a character’s thoughts.
Overall the plot was good and I really liked how Andrea had a strong personality even when trapped in a bad situation. Keep it up author! 👍

AMAZING

This book left me astonished!
I love how it portrays death in such a realistic way, it even made me think deeply about my own life and how I should cherish the moments, because this book teaches that moments don’t last forever, and death will always meet you one way or another.
The author has a unique writing style that would make any reader intrigued. I felt attached to all of the characters and even more sad when they met their end. But that’s how life is.

Side note: Adam’s story was my favorite.

Good job author!

Amazing book

I truly enjoyed this book😊. The story is captivating and well written, full of suspense and just the right amount of action too. Can’t wait to see how Blair will fight for her freedom and I wonder if she’ll help Emily’s sister too.

As for the writing style: the descriptions are on point although sometimes they can be repetitive like in chapter 1, but the rest is perfect 💕

Your story has great potential! This was already an amazing start and I can sense that things will only escalate from here. Highly recommend this book for thriller/mafia lovers 🥰

Great novel

The plot is well composed. Looking forward to reading more! Great book.

Exceptional plot

This novel is extremely intense and creative. I like how the main character is smart and able to avoid certain bad situations from these “alien” man who invaded earth. The author managed to pull of an unusual plot with these two woman who are best friends, and the trust they have in one another is quite refreshing to see. I found myself being afraid for them and for many other women within the plot, and although it is a fictional book, it also portrays the sad reality of the world that not everyone sees. Abuse and violence are the most evil curses in this world. One must be able to live through it with a strong heart and unbreakable hope.

Great work author.👍🏼

Action and Romance

I’m glad I got to read this book!

I would recommend this for those who love action mixed with a lil romance. Each character has their own traits and I absolutely love the MC Liam. The author manages to make the audience like the MC from the beginning and root for him in so many ways after all the struggle he has been through.

And Taito!😭 He’s such a loving character and everything about him is genuine.

Overall I rate it a 5 star! This book has its own uniqueness, even though I don’t usually read a lot of action books, this one got me wanting to read more and more. I love seeing the work of fabulous authors, keep it up with the writing! 😊

(Also, sorry if I don’t really have any constructive criticism. I’m not a professional or anything but I barely spotted any grammar mistakes, therefore there’s nothing for me to correct eheh)

Captivating

Only one chapter in and I'm already interested to see where it's headed. I love the main character (Angela Brown) so far, I adore the fact that she stands up for herself and has an attitude with claws. I'm intrigued about Andrew too, he seems rather mysterious and smart too. Lovely start.

The overall rating is definitely a five star.

Outstanding! Beautiful

I truly enjoyed this. The author has a wonderful way to dance with words and mingle with emotions! Amazing job. Highly recommended. 😍

Breathtaking

When I started reading this short story, I wasn’t sure what to expect, but the author has managed to move me in many ways.
I love how this story portrays the “eye is the window to the soul” concept. I felt every emotion from the characters and I just kept wishing for Itsuki and Mikael to end up together.

OUTSANDING

I simply love this author.
There’s clearly a huge development of the prince, he’s starting to get “softer” with humans, and I feel like he’ll do anything for Adara.
Certainly worth the read!

CAN’T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS! ❤️

EDIT:
Wow I just finished the book and it has been a rollercoaster! AMAZING. Felt so many emotions and their relationship made me tear up many times.

Absolutely amazing

I love everything about this story!
First, I`d like to say that I absolutely love the author's imagination for the titles of the chapters, second, I am in love with the writing style too, everything is beautifully described.

Now, as for the plot, if I could give it more than 5 stars I would, because the author deserves it! A unique concept to come by, it felt as if I was inside a fairy tale, full of fun, twists and magic, and of course, a bit of darkness too, it always makes the story intriguing.

I love all the brothers, they have extremely different personalities but they all love each other dearly, and Runa is a great main character! She clearly had some character growth too, she was a timid, poor girl, but strong, and the more she hung with the Sons of Midnights, the braver she became.

Intriguing

So far I'm enjoying the story, the author clearly planned this story well, the descriptions are beautiful and realistic, and I like how each character is different. Plus, I can easily feel the emotions of the characters which really makes me enjoy this book even more.

Good

The author did a great job in showing the characters emotions. The MC goes through some struggles and we can see the character improving as the story goes on.
Recommended.

The shattered Remains

The plot so far is good, the backstory of the main character and the emotions that Isabella goes through are well described. keep up the good work.

Great

I'm interested in seeing how Keshi`s relationship with Darren will develop. Up until now, the book kept me entertained and expecting the next chapters. Good job author.

amazing

I like how you describe your characters and emotions throughout the story. Beautiful writing! I recommend this to anyone

Death and Romance

I like the slow reveals and the addition of romance to the story. The story is about a romance between Joan and Thane, and it starts as attendees of a seminar die because of spoiled food. I like how their encounter was almost like fate.
There`s death, loss, and romance, and they are all handled realistically.

Thrilling

I don't usually read short stories, however, this one got me hooked. The author did a good job of portraying the main character's personality, it's about Joyce that goes down a rough path of murder. I won't spoil anything here. I recommend it to whoever likes to feel a good thrill.

I NEED MORE

To be honest, I wasn’t expecting to like this novel as much as I like it now. In fact I don’t even like it, I LOVE it!
Brayden is my fav boy and Damien is so cute and funny in his own way. I literally spent the entire weekend obsessing over this story, I recommend it.
This is now my fav book on Inkitt! Good job author and hope my words will motivate you to keep writing <3

Good Concept

The story is good. It`s about a man who desires to have a good woman on his side and one day a family on his own, I won't spoil anything here, but I recommend it.

Spooky

The story truly gives me the creeps, I wonder why they killed Cassiel. There's only one chapter so my review can only consist of that chapter. It`s a good way to start and to put the audience on their toes. Keep it up author :D

Great concept

This story certainly has potential! I love how the author described Sienna`s friends, they are all so different yet they care for each other. The dialogues are perfect and natural, they portray well the personalities of each character.
As for the grammar and writing style, I only found a few mistakes in the grammar, and some paragraphs are a bit too long, maybe just revise the structure of the story. But they aren't big issues, it happens and I also struggle with it a lot :)

Overall, great story! The concept is intriguing, and the story flows naturally through the chapters. Keep writing! :D

LOVE IT

I am in LOVE with this book! I'm currently on chapter 20, and I just needed to express how much I'm adoring this story. The author did amazing in describing the emotions of the characters, plus every detail in the book was very well planned. it requires amazing skills to write like this. THANK YOU AUTHOR FOR SUCH A BEAUTIFUL BOOK! I`ll definitely leave another review here when I finish the entire book.

EDIT: Okay so a quick update, I just finished the story and I can’t wait to read the sequel! I think I’ve said everything that I needed to say ❤️ good job author.

Loving it!

The world-building is great, the writing style is overall good and I'm loving the characters so far!