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WOW!

An amazing piece of work. Heavy and thought provoking. I enjoyed it very much and the latter part really struck a raw nerve for me.
I've read a few stories on this subject and they're always interesting. This one is up there with the best of them, I reckon.
I hadn't written anything for over a year until recently and dug into this theme myself (to a much lesser degree).

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Good stuff!

What a great story, possibly the shortest I've ever read. I liked the narrative voice, it put a smile on my face. Grim yet amusing.

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Very entertaining.

I enjoyed this very much. I felt like I was reading something that would sit right there beside Isaac Asimov or Ray Bradbury. An amazing world, well imagined.
A few issues with the grammar, other than that I'm hugely impressed. Well done.

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