JN Ras

I'm Jess. I'm 25, 80% grumpy irl, the youngest of seven children, collector of scented candles, and notorious lover of fluffy animals, even when that animal is a raccoon in my dumpster.

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Wonderful!

Loved this! What a wonderful concept. Im a big fan of the writing style and all these lively characters, I only wish it was longer! Keep it up!

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Sweet

Five Words is achingly sweet. The characters are all so young and fresh, but have the weight of the whole world on their shoulders. The descriptions are wonderful and thought out (especially the descriptions about the bakery and all of the goodness Cher bakes--I became quite hungry while reading this.). I love the way the characters interact with each other through the book; they are definitely made to mesh well together. I do hope there will be a sequel soon... always hoping for a happy ending! Great job!.

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Good start

I'm quite happy I stumbled upon your story. It's off to an interesting start! The beginning is wonderful--I really enjoyed how powerful it is and how easily the scene grabs the reader's attention. That's very hard to do, so good job! I'd love to see you add more details in about the whole story in general. It's your own little world-- please paint me a picture of it, it sounds lovely. Last thought: exclamation points are a wonderful tool to help get a point across to a reader and most of the time, they are used sparingly. With more details, the need for as many exclamation points would lessen. Keep up the good work! I'm very interested in seeing where this story will go.

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Impeccable

Easily one of my favorite pieces I’ve read! The writing is so smooth and fluent, it’s like butter. I love everything about this, the details, the wording, the characters, the setting—everything! Definitely on my “recommend” list! Great job!

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Dreamlike

I am no expert on poetry, but I do know that it has to be carefully produced to give the intended effect. Most people believe that poetry must be composed in a certain formula—and the author in this case gives an excellent case as to why that’s simply not true. This piece is clearly meaningful, poetic, and well thought out—from the word choice (😍) to the length of each line. Wonderful job, very deep and thought provoking.

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