Jo Abrigo

In the Ship of Dreams

Read. Write. Eat. Sleep. Repeat. ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค Mediocre at everything, a slave to editing. ๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค๐Ÿ–ค If a time machine exists, you'll never see Jo ever again.

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Who are these Shadow Men?

I like that this story was straight to the point. The MC, Eleanor, is likeable. Sheโ€™s a strong protagonist, and I couldnโ€™t stop reading it! I believe I only read this for a day.

Per chapter was a good sense of length, it was not too long or too short. The book was understandable; there was no need to whip out the dictionary. The dialogues were a good amount, I enjoyed it Dill and El's interactions very much. I couldnโ€™t think of any info dumps as it was straight to the point. I just wished TheGreenShoes was more elaborate about what was happening so I could wince or put the book down to really digest what I just read (I, sometimes, want to torture myself with bad decisions like El). I noticed that sensitive topics were discussed, but I believe TheGreenShoes edited it out for the sake of the competition? If not, I hoped she had written or explained more of what happened because it will make me cringe moooore. Other than that it was a good read!

Since the last sentence was โ€œTo be continuedโ€ I assume, you will give more clarity on the next book, and I will read it if thereโ€™s more!
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A Modern Twist of a Beloved Fairy Tale


This was a nice mystery rendition of Snow White!

Though, I'm not a huge fan of the fairy tale, this book made it better.

I liked that Calla didn't need a "prince" and was not entirely a damsel in distress all throughout the story. I also, liked the twist of romance by the end of it!

I noticed technical errors here and there, but if you go back to working on it, this book will be much more precise.

Good job! ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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An expedition to playing with my emotions.

First of all, I'm speechless.

You've written something so beautiful, and this pit in my stomach is a good thing because this is how I feel every time I finish I wonderful book. I hate that it has to finish. ๐Ÿ˜‚

I'd like to quote Jane Austen, "IF A BOOK IS WELL WRITTEN, I ALWAYS FIND IT TOO SHORT."

And to me, it certainly was. ๐Ÿ’”

This was, by far, the most satisfying book I have read so far in Inkitt. It was such a good read, I found it hard to decide whether I should continue to read or to sleep. I chose not to sleep.

This book is the fair amount of what I am looking for in a good book. Heck, it exceeded my expectations! It has charming characters, bloody good romance, adventure and a satisfying ending. Because the ending leaned towards what's realistic.

Though there were a few technical errors scattered within, it is easy to fix. ๐Ÿค—

I can't wait to read your next book because you've earned yourself a fan. I LOVE IT.

Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna cry. ๐Ÿ’–

-J.A.

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Ready!

I'm excited to read and review the contestants' entries. Let's begin ๐Ÿ‘๐Ÿผ

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Devious

What can I say? The author took me to another level of storytelling. Every chapter was a fresh page of paradise and hell, and it kept me on edge every time. I like stories that make me think or guess what's going to happen next, and this exceeds my expectations.
This book is like the poetry of Angels and Demons, it makes me float in the darkness. IT IS THAT BRILLIANT. I can't wait to devour more of it and deep dive to its darkest part of the ocean of narratives. Can I swear? It's F*CKING amazing, I will wait for the next chapter, please don't rush it. This story is carving its way to perfection.,and if someone thinks differently, they're wrong. ;) xoxoxo

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Good Different!

I like the plot a lot, it was such a fresh turn for me. I haven't read anything like this before.
Things, I noticed while reading your story (I want to help because your story has potential),
1. If you elaborate more, or describe what is happening around the characters, it would be much better. As a reader, I like to imagine what you try to paint on a canvas,
2. I like that you started with a scenario, but if I didn't read the comments and your responses, I would be hella confused all throughout.
3. Your plot has potential and if you polish it, it would be better.

I think your story would be amazing when you edit it! And when that time comes, I would gladly reread this. Good job! I was also 15 when I started writing (fan-fiction), Keep up the good work, hun! xxx

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Finding love, indeed

Reading this story made me feel like I'm part of the group. I got to see (read, rather) them make choices, have fun, discover new feelings, fall in love... It's just .... If screaming can help me express how I feel about it, then, it's all I want to do. Because it was truly lovely.

I love all the characters, even though Julie gets on my nerves at times, but all in all, I loved it. ๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–๐Ÿ’–

This experience was truly amazing. You are amazing, dear! Keep up the great work! xoxo

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