John Knox

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Great story

I am so impressed by your both your writing style and the way you remain true to the scripture. Very impressive and the first five star review I have ever given. God bless!

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Good Start

The plot was very good, but I would have liked to have seen it developed a little bit more. One grammar error that I caught because I used to do it all the time is the switching of past tense and present tense in the same paragraph or even sentence. It took me a while to habitually write in one tense through the entire story. The concept however was great and I look forward to reading more work from you.

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Good Plot

Loved that the first half of the story was written from the drone's point of view. Very unique.

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