I love anime and old school RPGs like Final Fantasy IV, V and VI. My first novel is The Enigma of the V and you can find it on Webnovel. Now I'm writing a new story called It's a Brave New World.

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I'm confused about this

I think some of the descriptions were nicely done. The thing is that I found it all confusing. Perhaps this is just the first draft and after some polishing it would all make sense in an awesome way. Or maybe we're not meant to understand it yet... Maybe it is all clarified in the upcoming chapters.
I recommend Proofreading... It would help weed out some mistakes that could confuse readers.

In the end, never give up! Just keep writing and bettering your craft. Good luck!

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