Joshua Collins

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Wow!

I must say, this is a really detailed and high lore fantasy. I quite enjoy books that built on world-buliding and lores such as heavily as this. The amount of descriptive details you put in this, is really impressive. Reading though this is really impressive and it was quite difficult to find a stopping point. I can't find any faults or mistakes, as you done a thoroughly good job typing this story out. The characters are done is a good way that makes them seem like they are distant, with their own quicks and flaws.

Overall this is a really good fantasy and I would recommend this to anyone. Good writing/typing!

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Good work!

Your story is quite an unique story of its own. I never read any stories that are mainly about sirens and I found how you interpret them (mainly the main character who's a siren), a refreshing way of going about your story. You good at being descriptive and i can very much follow along and envision everything that's going on. The characters are quite written out pretty well for them to feel expressive and engaged in our emotions.

Wonderful job so far. I really hope others will engage in your book. With the amount of work you put in your writing. You really deserve it.

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Oragon is a very neat world and I like to know more!

I really much enjoyed what you written so far. Very descriptive writing that I'm quite drawn in the story. Especially on wanting to know more about Oragon, it's world, it's magic and such. You also have a pretty good writing style, simple and easy to follow through and I thought the the journal from Maya's great great aunt, the way its been written was a pretty neat way of a written language in the 13 century.

Overall, It's a really neat story and I would definitely want to know more about it. Good job, so far.

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So good.

This is such a good book. Good plot, good characters. I really liked Dena's character, she seems cute in a descriptive sense XD. The writing is really on point, very engaging and descriptive that i can really much picture all of it. Can't wait to see what's next. 👍🏻

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Ronin: The Sword Who Cuts The Heavens

I really enjoyed this book. I'm a sucker for Samurai stories and anything that involves them. I really love the story and plot for this one. The characters are well written and the main character Manji is a very interesting character that seems himself as first a bad ass killer, to someone who loses his skills to kill and easily takes lives and starts relying on others to help him along the way. His personality changes too as someone who firsts thinks he would never be friends with anyone, to eventually thinking his companions as friends and the development bond between him and Masami is great. The action in this is well written and kept me intrigued as well as the drama. There's also enough commentary to keep things light and I love Manji's first person perspective as he does think some very interesting and hilarious words. Overall I really enjoyed this book and I can't wait for the next remaining parts of this series. ☺️

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