Zai ♡

Wassup I’m Zai and welcome to my account ♡

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.+*Jovi Nova*+.

To be honest, I feel like I rushed the first chapter and didn't take the time fully understand and think about the story and its overall plot. I wished I did but I'm too lazy to try to fix it cuz I never really have a plan for my story their just things I think of off the top of my head and I think that's why my story aren't the best and clean like the most anime/fanfics I read. You know what the story is about because the author thought it out and everything that's going to happen to the MC or their OC and I feel like I don't do that cuz my story isn't as thought out as most stories I like to read.

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Oh my lord! I need to work on my Grammar & Punctuation. I don't know why my Grammar & Punctuation is so bad I'm in 7th grade I should be able to write a readable sentence or story without having to re-read a word I put down cuz I don't know what the heck I said.

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