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Could not even understand it
I typically don't write bad reviews, and at least find some good in every story, but I honestly couldn't understand the writing. The grammar was non-existent and the plot didn't make sense. I'm not sure if the author is American, but the English skills are very poor and I had to stop reading because I seriously couldn't understand what I was reading.
I hope the author views their submission with a critical eye and gets the manuscript professionally edited. The plot could be intriguing but not as currently written.
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