Jonathan Smith

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A horror story, the real horror is the plot.

I'm gonna be upfront with you, the plot is generic. Now, of course, only 3 chapters in it can change and I hope it will.

The characters are okay I guess. I don't care about any besides the main girl. The story seems to be going in a direction that's very generic and boring.

The grammar and writing style is good though. I think if you improve the story a bit it will be a fine story.

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