Just_A_Wolf

Interesting

I didn't know how I felt about this when I first started. I knew that when I scrolled past it that the only reason i was going towards it was because I thought the cover was pretty. The description seemed interesting enough so I thought 'Why not?'. Anway, the story overall was good, there was the issue that at certain points I didn't really know what was going on and sometimes I got lost. I was interested though, I loved the wording at the end. It made it feel complete without feeling heartbreaking. If that makes any sense at all.

Pretty Good

I loved the overall story and I actually appreciated how short it was. I think it's one of those stories that needed to be short. I do have to admit though I was immediately turned off when I noticed the immediate grammar problems within the first sentence, it was just really hard to overlook. I continued reading because I love Sherlock and John. There were a few more grammar errors, but besides that it was a very good story. Brilliant idea!