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Intriguing story

I thought the story was well written. It opens well and pulls the reader in by revealing the world in bits and pieces. Decent distinction with the two characters presented. The flaw that caught me occurred in point of view, or head hopping. Flipping back forth between the two characters' thoughts and perspective felt jarring and took me out of the story.

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