KC Paradis

Great intrigue!

My review is for chapter 1 through 14 ... I love the writer's style, I related to the characters because they have strong back stories and feel very real. The intrigue is heavy about the box, I love that the writer takes her time to reveal what's inside, it makes you read the next chapters until you get to the reveal and then continue to the next chapters to find out what happens about it! Love it and can't wait to continue it :) Thanks for sharing your stories with us!

Great universe!

I loved how simple this story was, in the way that there wasn't an overload of information, it was a fantastical world but not too much and the characters were very relatable. I enjoyed reading this short story so much and would recommend it to anyone looking for something light and good!

Such a sweet story

I feel like the characters are so relatable, we can really imagine scenes, very well written, a beautiful love story that began with a bet and blossomed into something amazing. I love that the characters have such interesting backstories, makes you get attached to them. Thanks for sharing your stories!

Such a lovely story

I found this story very lovely, I was hooked since the first chapter and it only got better. Love, intrigue, fighting, it had it all! It is the type of story that is truly my favorite :) The only note I leave as feedback is to proofread it better because there were many grammar mistakes. Other than that, it was great!

Amazing story!!

This story was such a good read, I could not put it down. The writer has such an amazing way of making you visualize the scenes and feel like you are living them. I wish I could give it more than 5 stars!!

I can't put these books down!

I haven't been getting much sleep these days because every time I get to the end of one chapter, I can't help but click on Next Chapter again. These stories are addictive! Great job :) Now onto the next one :D

Loved it!

Even as a short story, you manage to fill lots of information and your characters are so lovable. Thanks for sharing with us!

Great plot twist!

Again with a MAJOR plot twist at the end! Love your stories because of this, you always surprise me. Apart from the spelling mistakes, the characters are relatable, the nose bleeds and things that happen are so well written to play
into the ending. Good job!

Amazing beautiful story!

The emotions in this story are so raw, so pure, so real. The way the writer describes what the people are feeling, you can relate perfectly and feel it too. Such great writing. A roller coaster of emotions, it was too good :)

Very good trilogy!

My rating is for the trilogy in its entirety. The main idea of the books was new to me, many plot ideas similar to others I have read, but what makes this trilogy better is the style if the writing. The description help create the world perfectly and the characters are very endearing. I loved it!

Loved it!

I have never read a story this long because I usually lose interest after the first twenty chapters. This one kept me clicking onto the next chapter to see what would happen, it was definitely a binge read over a few days. I love the writing style and the characters are so relatable, even the werewolves. There are a few times where she got on my nerves with how selfish she is, but I can understand where she is coming from too. Great read, plenty of ideas mixed it 👍

Wow!!

I loved the way you describe everything in your story. The characters are very relatable, even the "bad" ones. I liked the perspective of a teenager very much, I think it set the tone perfectly! Great plot idea and I found the ending so sad, but very realistic. Great writing, thanks for sharing with us :)

Such a great story!

I can't find fault in this story at all. The characters are lovely and so relatable, they each have a part to play in the story and it moves along at a slow and steady pace. I love the style of writing as well, two thumbs up!!

Great teenage love story!

I love the author's writing style, the characters are relatable and fun to get to know. A few grammar errors, but it doesn't take away from the sweet story. Definitely recommend for a reader who likes a light and funny romance story :)

Such a poignant story!

Other than a few spelling mistakes that did nothing to lessen my enjoyment of this book, it was amazing! Such a beautiful and new idea. The world that was created is so new and interesting. I loved every chapter, thank you for a great read :)

Such a great story!

I loved this series so much, it was a subject that could get complicated but the way the author wrote it was so simple to understand. As always, the characters are relatable and we fall in love with them so easily. I absolutely loved it!

Such a great story!

I love everything about this story, the characters are so relatable, even if they are often good or evil. I was captivated since the beginning and was so sad when it ended. However, that just means M.K. Rissen can write more new stories that we love so much! Thanks for sharing your imagination with us :)

Such a great story!!

Time travel stories usually confuse the heck out of me but this was so well written, I felt like I was living everything with them. Such a great story, I lived every minute of it :)

Amazing!!

I will forever be in love with your writing style! You could write about anything and I would love it, I am positive :) I aspire to be so good with my writing one day! So many awesome plot twists, I can't wait to read the next book... Awesome ending!

So sweet :)

This idea has the potential of being written into a full length story, however I love how sweet and innocent it seemed when I read it. It's a fast pace story since it's a "short" once, but worth the read :) I think I will love all of your stories, you're a great writer!

The twist ending 💗💗💗

Your style of writing is so darn good! The character's in this stand alone are so lovable, the whole you created was very realistic and honest. Thanks for sharing :)

Such a good ending to this series!

I can't say enough how much I love these stories. The style of writing is just so good, you can relate to the characters and you get caught up into the story in no time at all. The humor in the story is so well written, I have never laughed so much while reading. Thanks for sharing your stories :)

Such a great universe!

I love the universe you have created in your story! The characters are so well written, you hate the bad guy and love the good ones...for a short story it is packed with information and does not fall short of anything. I absolutely loved it and will read every single one of the 13! Thanks gor sharing :)

Great story!

I don't typically read dark romance like this, however I really liked it. The world of dragons is interesting, the characters are endearing, the story moves along at a perfect pace and the writing is just so good. Thanks for sharing this story :)

Wow!!

This story is so good, I binge read it, I couldn't put it down! The plot is so good, the characters really get you involved, you hate them and love them all feel for them. I loved it!

Loved it so much!

I was devastated by the first chapters, if you've read the first two stories than you got really attached. Then I had hope, then I was happy :) The emotions are strong in this story and it was beautiful to read. Thanks for sharing another great story!

So good!!

I loved this story as much as the first! The scene where she finds herself again is the best one I find, so powerful. The only feedback I have is that I wish your stories were longer :) Thanks for sharing.

Great story!

I can't wait to read the second part to this story! It is well written, we can really visualize everything that is described and the characters are relatable even though they aren't human. Thanks for a great read!

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

If I could rate this higher than 5 I would. I felt every emotion I read, I laughed, I cried and I was holding my breath through so many chapters. I genuinely think that this writer has an extraordinary talent and I am so happy that she shared this book with the world. This story deserves only the highest praise, really well written!

Such a sweet story

This story was so sweet, and I love the mini "twist" at the end when she looks at his phone :) Well written, I loved it!

Heartbreaking and beautiful

Wow, I did not expect to cry reading a short story. It was so unexpected, you really get attached to the characters and feel their loss. Thank you for such a good story.

Such a good story!!

I love the idea behind this story, the ending is so beautiful and even as a short story is it packed with so much details that we feel very close to the characters . I really enjoyed it and would read it again in a heartbeat. Great job!

The best werewolf story!!

I wish I could rate this story higher than a 5!! The characters are relatable, the plot is so great, it's different than all other werewolf stories in the way we are introduced to his mate. The writing is so good, we can feel the emotions deeply. I cried more than once while reading either very sad or very happy parts. Thank you so much for sharing this story! :)

Great book!

For a long part of the book I kept telling myself that their relationship was too toxic to work out ... Then the last few chapters explained it so well and the ending is perfect for them. Thanks for another good read!

Great story!

Great writing, you can feel the emotion leap off the words. The dance scene at the end where he shows her how he feels is so beautiful, great job! Thanks for sharing this with us.

So sad, yet so good!

This story I found was a bit different than your others, more centered on feelings and descriptions, it was very good! I love the dynamic between the two main characters and it was such a touching story. Hard to read at parts because it depicts cruel acts but worth the read.

Wow!

Where do you come up with all these ideas? A beautiful executed twist ending again, so well done! I applaud you for your creative writing.

Great twist and turns!

I love the ending so much, but the entire short story keeps you in suspense. Very well written, it's such a short story for such major twists and turns! Great job.

Great twsts!

I love that this is the third story I have read of yours and it has a great twist as well in it! I figures quickly that you love anything with a good twist ending in it! I loved it and hope your others are just as good :)

Great twist!

This is the second book I have read of yours on inkitt and I just love the twist endings so far! I love that it is set at summer camp and the writing is good. My only constructive feedback is to try and proof read it for spelling mistakes and try to make the chapters the same length. Other than that, loved it!

Great👏

I love the author's writing style, the plot is good and the ending is well done. I felt in the edge of my seat and was holding my breath through many scenes, well written! I love the character's and the emotion is felt through the writing 👍

Great story!

It may have been rushed (author's words in explanation) but I think it was such a good read nonetheless. The character's are easy to relate to and I love the style of writing.Thanks for sharing your stories. A 5 year hiatus from writing is also what I went through. It's good to be back!

Great story!

I really hope there is a second part to this story! I haven't checked yet... I thought this was so great. Really well written, you can feel the emotions and it's very touching. Good job!

Lovely erotic romance!

I loved this story so much. The idea of them getting a second chance, taking it and things working it is so lovely. Thanks for sharing such a good story :)

Such a good story!

The character's in this story are so lovable, we get attached to them from the start. It's a lovely realistic story that is very well written. Loved it!

I didn't want it to end!

This story is such a heartbreaking and beautiful finish in the trilogy. It's as though every plot line was closed and we weren't left with any doubts. I love this family and this story and I never wanted it to end. Thanks again for sharing your stories with us :)

Great yet again!!

I loved how he was able to "remember" again, so simple yet so genious! I loved this book so much and can't wait to start reading the third part :) Thanks so much for your stories, they are great!

Such a good story!

This story is heartbreaking, the writing is excellent, pulling you in since the very first chapter. The character's are well thought out and the plot lines really deliver. 5 stars for sure!

Stunning story!

Such a beautiful story, well written and the characters are so genuine. I loved every minute I was reading it. Thanks so much for sharing it with us!

Sweet story!

This was a sweet story, the characters in it were relatable and the story ide was good. Thanks for sharing!

Great!

This story was beyond beautiful, thanks again for sharing such lovely writing. The only thing that I noticed was words missing or words switched around sometimes. Other than that, great stuff👍

Beautiful story!

I love the author's note at the end. Makes this whole book even more special because it was written to help others see themselves the way they should:) We are all beautiful in our own way and this book represented the challenges that comes with accepting ourselves the way we are. Thanks so much for sharing this story with us!

Great!

I loved this book from start to finish, the character's are interesting, the plot is not overly drawn out and the feelings are well conveyed. Great read!

Great story! 5 stars!

This was a beautifully written story. It had many twists and turns, always keeping me on my toes. The characters are so thoughtfully written, we can feel their every emotion. Great writing! Thanks for sharing this story.

So good!

I get so sad every time I finish your stories. They are so well written, the plot ideas so fresh, I am constantly amazed at how you can make me feel the story. Thanks for sharing your stories 💗

Great yet again!

"... A sinner like her to create such purity." That phrase had me sobbing, your writing is just so good! Thanks again for another beautiful story with intricate characters and funny dialogue.

Wow!

No wonder so many people love this story. The characters are so well written, they are complicated and lovely. The style of writing is one of the best I have found so far on inkitt. Thanks for sharing with us!

The only constructive feedback I can think of is that sometimes from one paragraph to the next we shift from one scene to another without it being clear. I caught on pretty quick that it was a new scene, but it would be nice to not have to guess :)

Great so far!

I really like the story so far, the idea of a mate rejecting another is something new to me. Usually it's the other way around. I know this is your first attempts at writing and I think you've gotten off to a good start :) I love reading so I can follow your ideas and dialogue, however I think you could maybe try separating dialogue from actions because it seems all jumbled together sometimes. Other than that, I really like the idea, can't wait for an update 👍

Great twists & turns !

For a short story, there are an awful lot of twist and turns to this story! I loved it and could really see it as a longer novel !

Great story again!

I really love how you develop your characters. You give them such depth and make it seem easy! I hope one day to be able to write as intricately as you do. Keep up the good work :)

Amazing!

This is by far the most the best book I have read on this app! You have such a way of making people feel what the characters are feeling. I got so engrossed in this book, I could not put it down. Thank you for sharing it with the world :)

This story made my heart happy :)

The idea behind this series is so good, I felt so invested in these characters. I feel sad that I have already finished it but I can console myself knowing that this writer has so many other stories to choose from :) This one really spoke to my heart though, such great writing!

What an ending!!

Another great story! Love the writing, the plot is fresh and the characters are so relatable. Thanks for sharing :)

The writing is so good!

I have never felt so many chills than while reading this book! So many "wow" moments, twists and turns, reveals that are so darn good! I loved it so much :)