Kenzie

I write. Also on Wattpad – sunnysunshines My career is based on writing and editing and I LOVE doing it, so if you ever want a review I’d be happy to do so.

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Looking forward to reading more!

So far, I’m very pleased by the sentence structure and punctuation (I’m a grammar nerd, sue me). I think the plot has great potential, it’s just early! I’d love to get some more background and see the characters - namely Tobias - in different settings to get some character development started. I think one thing to explore is conversational tone, even if it’s not dialogue! It helps evoke certain emotions a little easier. Can’t wait to read more!

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So far, so great

With great descriptive sentences, a well-explained back story, and very few typos, missing punctuation, or unclear facts, this seems to be a thought out and exciting story wherein two people who have lost a lot come together and find solace in each other (that’s an assumption, because I THINK I know where you’re going with your story). I’m excited to read more. Keep up the good work and just remember to proofread!

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