KerryRadloff

My range is pretty diverse - children's stuff, literary fiction, blogging, copy writing. Recently relocated to Canada from South Africa....living in an old RV.

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The Cradle Snatcher

An avid crime/thriller reader had me adding your story to my reading list as soon as I spotted it - and you didn't disappoint! There were a few places where you could tidy up a fraction - make the flow smoother. I hope to read more of this soon - want to know where you are taking it. Thank you!

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Daddy's Obsession

Great start - with an interesting plot concept. Feel you need to revise it, edit - play with some of your concepts to tidy them into something that s[flows a little more easily. Grammar checks, too. Otherwise, an enjoyable read, thank you

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Going back for more

Much potential in this story, but I found it a tad long-winded, which made it difficult to read. I so wanted it to flow better for me as I was interested in your subject matter. Could you tweak it a bit? :-)

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This little piggy

Generally, a great read - thank you. A few chapters were a tad wordy, but interesting, nevertheless. Perhaps you can pull it together a bit more, cut out extraneous explanations / words....make a reader have to guess a little more. It's evident you've either worked with - or have done excellent research into - psychotics/death row inmates / interviews with them : those chapters had me enthralled. Thank you very much.

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Moments of Grace

Wow! Just wow! (I'm new here and have been trawling around trying to find books to read that will truly pique my interest. You've got me hooked. (and I'm a horribly fussy reader, I'm ashamed to admit!) Great plot - wonderful prose...sad, sad, sad. But also funny! Its' SO real. Thank you, thank you!

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Anonymous

Hi Ana - thanks for your story. I'm new to Inkitt - and set about looking for books that would pique my interest: Anonymous hit the button. Interesting plot within a plot - I found the second part (After 5 years) easier to read - the flow was smoother, and quicker. What this suggested to me (aside from just being an easier part to read, was the obvious growth in Ava from the young, nervous intern to a practising psychologist. Perhaps because of the heavy slant on technical terms and explanations (which were welcome, nevertheless) that first part was more ponderous. All in all - a good read amd I look forward to seeing where it goes.

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AGNI The Secret Door

Great concept. Love the idea of fire being something the gods bring down - whether for good purpose or not. However, you would benefit enormously from a good edit and assistance with grammar and prose styling: I know English is not your first language - and believe me, you have done remarkably well despite this, but it interrupts the flow of an otherwise good story. Thanks for the read!

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