KFC164

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Amazing 2 chapters in...

Interesting and engaging to read. I was into the book straight away and I like how you put mini translations of words in a different language because it makes you learn something as well as for fun.

Well done!

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Overall Rating
Plot
Writing Style
Grammar Punctuation

My review

This is soo good! I was really hooked right from the beginning and was so disappointed when there wasn’t any more chapters! I can’t wait for you to write more.

To improve I think you should reread your story and check for punctuation errors and think of more complex punctuation and vocabulary. It is so amazing though!

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