KiawahAdev

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Woah...

You really managed to tug my heartstrings there! That poor princess! If I were a heroine in that world I would have stormed in there and told her father off...

One improvement: do keep to the same tense! You started out with past tense, but sometimes you write in present tense, and that's a bit confusing.

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The Bright Sunrise by Laraine Smith

This is a rare poem. Although this book only contains one poem, the poem is masterfully constructed in the form a haiku with two verses, describing the morning of the author's home country.

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Interesting

So as I feel that the story is leaning towards the sexual side of things, it's not really my thing. But I can echo what another review said, that you have great cliffhangers! I feel that you can give an insight into the characters more though, as it would help in the development in your story. Right now it's quite surface level.

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