(Ongoing, read until the end of chapter 5)
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You had me hooked on the summary of the story before I even did any real reading. I love how different this story is. The plot, the characters, the imaginative world you've created--it was all so addictive. I love seeing authors stepping away from the cliché storyline on a werewolf book about the mate bond.
Your lead female character is my favorite. I like how unsure she is of herself about her loyalty, whether it is to her family, or her newly discovered mate. I find Erick being a big contradiction which isn't a bad thing. He has a this notion about humans being beneath the werewolf species, yet he has one for a mate, and he seems to be accepting of that which I like. You kept me engaged throughout the story, and it was nice reading Erick's encounter with a mate who was from a species he considered slaves.
Great work, and I'll surely be reading for more!