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A girl with a dream...

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The Six Guardians

This is a promising story with a lot of potential. The summary at the beginning was very interesting, especially the plot entry. I liked the characters, their developments and interactions during the start but I was looking forward to more in your plot.

The plot of your story seems to stay at the same level and dragged out a little. You introduced each Monarch and their different struggles through different chapters, but with such a stunning plot entry, I wanted to be at the edge of my seat for more. It's a good story with an exciting entry, it just wants a little twist in there to make me pop my eyes a little more.

Hope this helped you somewhat. Good job and good luck!

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Simple, but amazing!

When I read the title of this story, it intrigued me and I found it so interesting. At first I was confused about the lead female's predicament, but the more I read the more I was transfixed. This was a refreshing book about a three on one and I loved it.

You made me feel like I was Vanquish, Hunter and Racer's little rabbit. Lol...

Keep up the good work love. Your book is absolutely addictive!

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Bang story!

From the moment I read the storyline and what it was about, I was in love! Keep up the good work!

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Ray of Sunshine

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I find the whole context of your story adorable. The budding relationship between Dark and Ray is at a good start, I just wish that there was more character development for them. You said that English is not your first language and you did well trying to incorporate it in your work, but there was a lot of grammatical errors, especially throughout some of your dialogue.

The first two chapters were very interesting with the plot, but after that, it didn't develop into something more. I thought that Ray got attached to Dark a little too fast, when she was so obviously scared in the beginning.

It's not a bad story, just needs to be fixed in some areas. Good job and good luck!

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Engaging Story!

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You had me hooked on the summary of the story before I even did any real reading. I love how different this story is. The plot, the characters, the imaginative world you've created--it was all so addictive. I love seeing authors stepping away from the cliché storyline on a werewolf book about the mate bond.

Your lead female character is my favorite. I like how unsure she is of herself about her loyalty, whether it is to her family, or her newly discovered mate. I find Erick being a big contradiction which isn't a bad thing. He has a this notion about humans being beneath the werewolf species, yet he has one for a mate, and he seems to be accepting of that which I like. You kept me engaged throughout the story, and it was nice reading Erick's encounter with a mate who was from a species he considered slaves.

Great work, and I'll surely be reading for more!

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