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MILADY! Finally found this! I feel like I can't say much because I'm not into Firefly quite yet, but I think I understand the premise of the series, and thusly I can appreciate the comedy of the situation you put them in. The angst generated by lack of angst is adorable, and you convey it well. Your style seems a *little* bland, perhaps because you want to focus on the dialogue between characters, but as a person who's never seen Firefly I would appreciate some description of the characters. Maybe throw in something that is exactly who that person is, something that would make a reader feel like they're watching an episode of Firefly. SPAG on point, as always, and I sally forth to read the next chapter!

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