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When the demon smiles

Honestly, it's a great story. I love the plot, and the characters. I've seen some grammar/spelling errors but every story has them. The only thing I would recommend is spacing out your paragraphs and dialogue. It would make it much easier to read and understand. Other than that, I didn't see anything else wrong with it. It's an amazing story.!

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A must read

I've only read one chapter but I'm already wanting to read more. The imagery is amazing. It's interesting and after reading the first chapter you will definitely be sucked in until you finish. I think it's very well written. It struck my interest.I will definitely recommend this book to my friends.

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Pride and promises

I loved it! I read the first chapter but I'm absolutely intrigued. I actually only have one recommendation, you wrote about how Mike and Allie were together for 3 years. It was said throughout the chapter multiple times when I don't think it was necessary for it to be said more than twice. Other than that it was amazing. I hope that Mike doesn't break Allies heart because I already like her. You did a great job writing it and I can't wait to read more!

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The assassin's beast

I only ready the first two chapters but I liked it. Grace had no personality so it was hard to stay interested. It doesn't mention her age in the first two, I would recommend adding it. I personally don't like reading stories when the main character is under 16 so when I know their age I get the feel of the book. There's a couple of things that feel unrealistic. The fact that her dad hits her on her back and leg yet it doesn't stop her from being able to climb up the wall. And when she jumps down she doesn't sustain any injuries. Unless she is a wolf there's no way she can recover that quickly. There was a few grammar mistakes but not many. It has a good storyline and I would like to see where it goes from here.

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Friendzone

I wish the chapters were longer. The story is amazing. The only recommendation I have is not spilling out all of the information. I think it would make the story more interesting if the information was more spread out through the chapter. It was really good though. I liked all the characters. I can't wait for an update!

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The broken pieces

I really liked it. I love books like this one. It shows things the people actually go through. I can't wait to see how this trauma affects the main character and how she deals with it. The story is amazing and I can't wait to read more!

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Blood of the Sapphire

I read the first chapter and I liked it. I want to find out more. The rules of being a vampire. I know there's so many different versions of them. It's a little weird that she's blind because most of the time, vampire can heal quickly. But it might be different in this story. The first chapter was kinda short and I hope the rest of them are long. If not that's perfectly okay. Overall, I really liked it and I can't wait to read more!

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Assassin Age

I read the first chapter. The story is good. I like where it's going but some of it just doesn't seem realistic. When the police showed up to arrest those guys wouldn't they call an ambulance especially since some of them are knocked out? Wouldn't they have to bring her in for questioning?Also her not going to gym for a month without a doctor's note? I don't think an actual teacher would allow that. Even with a doctor's note she would still have to be in class, she would probably just have to do book work. Other than that it was actually pretty good. I like that it was her saving him and not the other way around. I didn't see many spelling or Grammer mistakes. I'll definitely continue to read it!

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Diane

The story is good. The chapters are short though. I see some grammar mistakes but I completely understand especially if you don't edit before posting. I haven't made it far but I liked what I have read!

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An amazing story

I'm in love with this book! I'm only on chapter 8 but I can't wait to read the rest of it. I love Damien. I know he's a killer and all but he also seems like someone worth knowing. Finding out Destiny can see that little boy drowning took me by surprise. The story is definitely worth reading. Your writing is amazing. I see people comment about spelling/ grammer errors but for me the story is so good I don't even realize something is spelled wrong. I can't wait to find out more about Destiny and if Damien can complete his mission on capturing her. I can't wait to finish it and if anybody asks for a recommendation for a book, I'll tell them yours is a must read!

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Lovely

The story is really good. The discriptions make me be able to really see the story. It's very well written and I can't way to read the rest of it!

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A must read

It was so good! I honestly can't wait to read the rest. I like the plot, it's very interesting. I will definitely recommend it.

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Bana

I love this book so much! I have been shipping Blake and Lana since the beginning. I really hope they are endgame!

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