Kit Francis0427

Stars can't shine without darkness

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Interesting

Your book is quite interesting even though I haven't finish reading yet. I also love your writing skills, it really make your work excellent. Keep the good work and please keep updating

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Good

I like your book although there are grammatical errors in every chapter. Do your best to improve your grammar and your writing skills as well.

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I love your book

i really can"t stop myself reading your book. It is very interesting to read. Good job for completing this book. I really love it.

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Good

Your writing skills is amazing. It gives the whole details of every scenario. I like your story and I am looking forward to the next chapters. Do your best to finish your book.🤗

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Interesting!!!

I love your book. It is really interesting especially in the introduction of your story. Even though, I don't usually read erotica. Your wriitng skill is easy to understand as well. Keep the good work and do your best.

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Interesting

Your story is great and interesting to read, especially after reading your plot. It's quite short but has a deeper meaning that makes you imagine its story and possible situations will happen between the main characters. You also perfectly described every detail in the situation, which makes your writing skills understandable and great. Good Job

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Nice story!!

Wow! Your story is great especially the plot. It really gave me an ideas about what will happen in the story. Your writing skill is also amazing. You described every detailed informaiton in the story. So good job!!

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Great!

Your book is great!! I find it really interesting and fun to read. Your writing skill is also amazing. Good Job!!

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Such an interesting story

I could feel the heat of love in the beginning of the plot, which eager me to continue reading it. I still haven't finish reading it but I really wanted to read it until the end. Good job in writing your story. You perfectly explained every detail of your story especially the unexpected encounter of the main character.

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Quite interesting

Your story is quite interesting. You perfectly describe the interactions of the characters and was able to express their feelings. I absolutely like your writing skills. Keep the good work!

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Nice!

Your story is nice especially its title. However, you have a lot of grammatical errors and missing punctuation. So, please improve your grammars and fix your story. It have a good potential. So good luck and wish you all the best!

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great story

I like the way you describe every thing in the scenerio and how sensational the story is. It's great! I can able to describe it well though I don't really read 18+ and matured stories that involves sex.

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I really loved your story

You perfectly described the whole scenario and the characters of the story. I loved your writing skills. It helps me to understand more on your story. I still haven't finish reading it but I think your book is great. Also, your plot actually captured my attention. It makes me want to read your book and understand the situation of Roulette and William. Keep the good work!

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Interesting story

Your story is quite interesting. I love the way you write your story just like how the main character express his feelings. I could feel the sadness as I read the story. Please update soon and keep the good work

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Great and interesting

Hi, I still haven't finish reading your book but I really can't help myself feeling excited to read the next chapters. You have a great summary, which makes the readers attract to your book including me. To be honest, I love the way how you describe the characters and your writing skills. Keep the good work!

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I love it!!

Wow, I really love the way you write your story. It gives the whole detail of the scenario. Keep up the good work.

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Great Story!!

I reallly love your story. I love the way you describe and your writing skills. Your story is not too cliche especially in the first chapter. Even I can't stop myself scrolling down. Keep up the good work.

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I love it!!

your book is very interesting and I love the way you describe the characters and their actions, especially in your prologue. i haven"t done reading yet but please keep updating your book. I want to read the whole story.

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amazing

I love your writing skills and the plot of your story. it is full of mystery that"s why I am looking forward to your book.

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Amazing!!!

Wow I really like your book, it is too interesting to read. Please keep on updating. Give your best to complete your book.

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Interesting

Your book is very interesting although there are some grammatical errors in every chapters. Give your best shot and do your best to improve your book. I am looking foward to it🤗🤗

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Interesting and fun

Wow! Your book is quite interesting, I really loved the way Isabel decribes her feelings toward Aiden ❤️❤️❤️ keep the good work and keep updating. I am looking foward to it.

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