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Westminster

Hey. Im a person who loves to write and read. Recommand stuff to Lynn Nix, Kitties Rule (My sister) and totallynotquanahparker

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Very detailed

Your writing piece is very detailed. Every detail let's me imagine it in my mind. You should make another book like this. This would be published. Awesome work!

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Cliffhanger

I like i t so far, though, I'd like some more plot. It would then make me rate this 5 stars.

-Gracieloveskitties

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Awesome!

I think that this book is just great. I feel like I'm there with the cat too. You should add more though.

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Foogy visons

Awesome book. Keep it up.

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Didn't answer my mom

This book is probably my favorite over the whole inkitt world! I couldn't put it down and when My mom would call my name, I didn't answer her because this book had me distracted. Keep up the good work!!

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Dang!

Dang! I never thought people would make stories this Great!!! I'll read your other stories of you read mine called Kitten Trouble: Book 1

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Shattered Hearts

Fariyberry explains about the main characters, who they are, what their emotions + feeling are, etc. The explains every little detail in each chapter You don't have to ask her to change anything because its already done. Anyway, that's not the point, the point is, is that a writing with these are important and are future-published:

Grammar free
Sensory details
Main characters' feelings and emotions
No mistakes (as said on the first thing)
Punctuated
Capitalised correctly
Amazing book

Awesome work Fairyberry.

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Awesome

This is, like, the grammar-free writing I'd like to see! Awesome Grammar!

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Hooookkkkeeeeeddddd....!!!!!

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Red Rose

I'd say this is really good. so there's a few grammatical errors in your writing. Overall, this is the best writing piece I've seen so far! Awesome work! I'd suggest trying Gammerly Keyboard. I use it all the time and its really grammer helpful. Try it out!

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The End of Cheddar

Awe. I bet it was hard to do for the narrator. Put at least Cheddar went to a good place. This was a great series

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Mystery

This is like a uncovered mystery. Though, I really wish you would write more. That's how intense it is. I would definitely recommend this to Donald Trump.

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Missing/wrong comma punctuated

Missing a lot of commas, and commas in the wrong places," Hey gramma(,) hey papa" or "Gramma(,)papa" Though, overall, this is really good. Also, commas not supposed to be after the end quotes
For example "Hey Gramma, Hey papa. I'm heading out!"(,)

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Historia divertida

Pensé que esto sería más largo, y lo abro y es esta oración. Esa es la parte divertida al respecto. Nadie debería decir que agregue más. Es increíble la forma en que ya lo es.

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A cat's story

Awesome book

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A little love

This is a great book. I would really love for you to add more to this. Thanks!

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Nature Poems

I like how there is rhyme. I can actually picture the setting of nature in my mind. You should do more poem books like this.

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Great story

I like that this book is great. Though, I rated 4 star for writing style because the words on the first chapter is supposed to be bold. 'England 1545' is supposed to be bold

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Piper

OMG!!! your book is great. I love how you explained everything.

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Love it

Awesome. Awesome awesome awesome.

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Pefecto.

I often think that people that says that it's not a good book are probably just jealous that this book is actually great. Maybe better than their books. So I give this a rating of 5.0. I really give it a 6.0 but that's not a rating.

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Kitty Kitty

I love it. Love love love it. It is awesome. Since you like cats so much, how about you read mine. And leave a review. Thanks

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Good

Good but the stuff that's in it needs to be explained like WHY did Alvin ride his skateboard in the house or WHY was he not allowed to?

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Five Times

I like it.
I recommend it to everyone.
I love it!!

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Perfect!!!

Good book!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Dang!

You are a great arther. can you check mine out called Kitten Trouble.

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Needs at least one more chapter

I like that you explained the kitten infestation but needs more chapters. Like explain who gets the kitten, the kittens' lives, and stuff like that.

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