Kiwiti

Y'all can call me K. I'm 16 yrs and a major bookworm! My favorites are Rick Riordan's books, Mazerunner, The Mortal Instruments, Harry Potter. I'm Bi-curious.

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Interesting but Grammar Errors

Like I said in my comment, this is a really interesting start to this book, but also like I said in my comment, there are quite a lot of instances where you switch from past to present tense and some other grammar errors. Your writing style was pretty good and I can't wait for more of this story, it definitely hooked me in and made me all intrigued for what will happen next. Keep up the good work, just fix up those grammar errors and it's a great start!

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