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Very intriguing!

I love this story, the plot is very interesting. I love the foreshadowing at the beginning letting me know this is sure to be a twisting thrilling story as it progresses. Reminds me of an anime and I LOVE anime plots (most times). My only critique is your writing style, its good but i feel like you could elevate it a bit by using more descriptive words and less wordiness when writing. like instead of saying something like "there is a table with silver bracelets two on top for hands and two on the bottom for feet..."

you could say something like

"There is a table with silver cuffs attached to the top and bottom for binding the hands and feet."

I think the second sounds smoother or more smooth lol. Great job!!❤️🎊

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Fantastic!

I love the theme, fanfiction is one of my favorite genres because of the way different people re imagine their favorite stories, and this one didnt disappoint. Even though its completed it feels like a cliffhanger. The short story managed to deliver an enthralling and enrapturing plot with ample detail and from a 2nd person point of view, so its like your really there. I love fantasy and i most definitely want to read more about this magical and venge filled adventure! Only criticism is formatting, maybe add a space between the character dialogue and the detailed text. Marvelous job!❤️🎊😆

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SPECTACULAR!!

OMG this story was riveting. Had me at the edge of my seat the entire time. Writing horror can be a difficult thing because you have to keep the reader engaged and suspenseful the whole time, but you pulled it off marvelously. I love the attention gripping details, and lifelike scenes. Truly a chilling story. You brought this story to life and i was amazing. I suggest everybody read this story but do not read it at night or in the dark.....or alone. LOVE LOVE LOVE YOUU!!❤❤❤🥰😘

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EXTRAVAGANTLY DONE!

All the books from this author are amazing. Everything is spectacular. I cannot even begin to describe how good this authors stories are you have to read them for yourself. Read this book! I love everything!

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MORE PELASE!

All the books from this author are amazing. Everything is spectacular. I cannot even begin to describe how good this authors stories are you have to read them for yourself. I especially love the diversity of all the stories a little bit of dragons, some unicorns and all kinds of mystical things. It’s like reading multiple stories, and I was left wanting a sequel for each one! Amazing!❤️🔥

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JUST AMAZING

All the books from this author are amazing. Everything is spectacular. I cannot even begin to describe how good this authors stories are you have to read them for yourself. This book is so good, 8 love the plot the most out of everything, the characters where very well expressed and developed as was the relationship. I LOVE THIS AUTHOR. The smut in this one was hot too. Please read this story🔥❤️❤️

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SPECATCULAR

All the books from this author are amazing. Everything is spectacular. I cannot even begin to describe how good this authors stories are you have to read them for yourself. But this book was amazing! The development was there and I love the writing style. I also like how the author writes the stories in a way where anyone can see themselves as the main character no matter what they look like.❤️❤️🔥🔥👏🏾👏🏾 I literally love this author!

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WOW

WOW! That was so good! I loved the story it was short and to the point but didn’t lack any details, or seem vague, the flow was also very good and easy to understand. The character development was practical and reasonable so was the relationship development, I wasn’t left wondering how they got so close. Amazing job would recommend to anyone who likes erotica and action. ❤️❤️🔥

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WOW

This book was so good he character development and the development of the relationship was brisk but not choppy and steady but not slow. I love the characters emotional layers it’s like I saw another side to the characters without losing touch with who they are. I also loved the ethnic inclusion and the poetry such a beautiful writing style and a beautiful story! It was so spicy too, hot smut. Can’t wait for more such a gripping cliffhanger❤️❤️👏🏾🔥🔥

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Fantastic!

This book was absolutely amazing! The plot was amazing and I especially loved the drama and how well the main characters relationship developed. So smooth-but, the grammar was noticeably bad. Other than that the story was so good! Thank you so much for writing, the smut wasn’t as detailed as I would have liked but it was still steamy and attention grabbing. ❤️👏🏾

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Can’t even explain how good it is!

OH MEH GAAAAD! I read this book before on another account ( I have a new one now) and honestly, as if it’s even possible, it’s even better the second time! The characters development, the emotional turmoil, the DRAMA! I felt it all again and IM IN LOVE! This is such a fantastic book I wasn’t really looking out for any, but I didn’t notice any grammar mistakes.(like I would care if there were any) this book is perfect for you if you love erotica, drama, BDSM, and romance(ME) the plot is addictive and everything is on point. I wasn’t lost at any time during this story and I have a good idea of what the characters look like. I especially love the details, that’s a big thing for me and you (the author) delivered! 👏🏾 BRAVO can’t wait to read the sequel! I’m so exited!

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Thank you

Thanks for being honest all your fans will be waiting for you! Can’t wait to see your more serious books too

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This was madness!

WOW WOW WOW. This is possibly the best story ive ever read. The plot and characters reminds me a little of the detailed life of the joker and harley, but this story is just breathtaking. The amount of turmoil, emotion and pure rage that this story incites is astronomical. This story was so raw and ugly it was beautiful, the pure confusion and peace i felt while reading was true reader liberation. Never have i ever been so enthralled and captivated by a story and its' insanity as i have while reading this one. The aspects in which the author twists the mind of the reader through descriptive analysis of the characters is mind-blowing. The chaos was so beautiful and poetic i don know if i want to have this story taken down or beg for more chapters. This a a must read. READ IT!❤️❤️🎊🎊🎊😱

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I LOVE IT

This book is so beautifully written. I love the questions that keep me guessing and I love how relatable this is. This is truly a piece of art. The descriptions of thought process are something I can relate to and are so well written it’s like I was in the main characters mind. Though this isn’t finished yet I can already feel the main characters turmoil and emotions. The poetic depth is also very beautiful and touching. Wonderful story with amazing aspects of reality, poetry, and conscious and subconscious thought. 😍❤️❤️👏🏾AMAZING

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Truly Lovely

I absolutely loved this poetry. The depth and raw emotion was so touching like the author was speaking to your heart to the you of you. (if that makes sense) The beautiful rhetoric and figure of speech was refreshing and original with new perspectives iv'e never though about. Amazing poetry!❤️🎊

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Intriguing

I love the plot of the story, i think the formatting of the writing as well as the flow of the story could be a little better. But wow I cant wait to see how they escape and what happens. It gives me maze runner vibes. This encapsulating story will be one to remember and i cant wait to find out more!❤️

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Beautiful!

This story is so beautifully written. Lose yourself in the wonder and mystery of Scarlette's novel Deviant. She takes you to a magical world beautifully described with hauntingly poetic style and an enrapturing magnificence unlike any other. You will instantly find yourself enamored with her writing and stories. This is truly one of the most well written and attention grabbing stories iv'e ever read. Truly a pleasure to read. BRAVO❤️

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Dark and intriuging

This story is AMAZING, I love the spin on our everyday conception of what we think witches and demons and all that should be, very creative. The writing style is beautiful smooth flow and descriptive sentences. The plot is FIRE, I wasn't expecting it to be so interesting. I also love the use of metaphors, similes and other figures of speech, its akin to something I would write and very, nice in the story.❤️😊🥰 Spectacular!

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AMAZING

Wow this story was so hot and just WOW. I loved the detail and the turmoil, the plot was riveting. I especially love the character development, the way the main character Mari developed into a stronger character was beautifully done. I love this story, reminds me of a coming of age. Recommend to anyone who likes erotica, romance and drama.👏🏾❤️❤️

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LOVE LOVE LOVE!

Ahh this book was so good! No smut, but I’m not complaining. This book was so intriguing and just amazing, character development was there the position was good, and I can’t wait to read the second part!❤️❤️

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SOO GOOD!

First off your writing style is amazing, I also loved the vibe of the story. I also love the ethnic diversity of this book, so nice how you switched it up a bit! This story was absolutely the sweetest! I loved it so much, I also love the detail and thoroughness of this story without it dragging on, so that you can still call this a short story without it lacking anything. Great character development, I absolutely loved how the girl wanted to stay true to her self and have her mate stay true to himself without holding each other hostage, that was growth and I love that. Leshy is such a freakin- ugh so hot. Please extend this book! (And get me a nature spirit hot mate, ugh the horns, yes please, the height, oh yes) Lol anyways, read this book!❤️🔥🔥👏🏾

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BEAUTIFUL

This is possibly the best book I’ve ever read, the character development, the turmoil, the emotions everything is literally perfect. I connected with these characters so much and it is such a touching story. I would love a sequel about their future together or college or something. This book was so good, the character development made me really get to know the characters, and the detail was immaculate. A lot of care and preparation was put into this story and it was beautiful. I especially loved the cultural and ethnic inclusion, it was so refreshing. There wasn’t much smut, only one chapter with it and it wasn’t detailed for those looking for erotica. 😭❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Amazing!

Omg this book was great the character development was good and everything was so addicting. Truly a captivating book. Can’t wait for part two that cliff hanger was brutal.❤️

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Amazing

This book of short erotic stories was so HOT🔥. I love the plots of them all and I like how everything is different and unique, the s twists of the stories also keeps it interesting. Great job!❤️

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Very nice

Wow this was nice short three part story, lots of words and stuff was misspelled and a little hard to read and the flow was off because of that. Also the plot was fast in the first chapter as well as the development of the relationship, which is understandable since it’s a short story, just a note. Very nice overall, I enjoyed I short read.❤️

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Nice

This was a overall good book. The plot I feel unfolded a little quickly without, or very little exposition and explanation. I feel the status of the world about the witches and the other packs was not explained thoroughly enough, like how may covens are there? Where are the vampires living? How are they living? Do they have hierarchy’s like werewolves? Also the plot was a little strange for me, like random things started happening and things just escalated so fast without explanation. I was also a bit peeved about the ending, I mean no epilogue? Bummer, I have to read a whole other book to find out. I suggest disclosing that this is a series from the begging so I can be prepared to invest the time needed to read it. This book wasn’t as captivating as I thought it would be, the summary made it look so much better than I think, it actually was. I think some more turmoil and more thorough explanations and expositions were needed so the reader can keep up and understand the characters mindsets and reasoning. Character development was also lacking, I feel like I didn’t really know any of the characters, what about the brothers? No chapters for them, no scenes for them? The author told us the characteristics of the characters, but did not manifest those characteristics through the characters actions. Anyway, I’m ranting, it was a good quick, read, overall satisfying, thank you for sharing your thoughts and stories on this platform it is appreciated.❤️👍🏾👌🏾

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Wow

Wow just wow, this book was so many things, it was captivating, infuriating, heart touching, but most of all it was jaw dropping. I mean I don’t even have the words to describe this book. It was that, WOW. Some people may think this book wasn’t good and that just depends on the person. Personally, I liked it, it was invigorating to read I never really knew what would happen next. There wasn’t that much sexual content as there was provoking people, mindsets and situations. And there were a lot of those. This book really interacted with the readers on a personal level ( at least for me ) it touched base on some physiological facts and as well as some really deep theories. By the end of the book I didn’t know whether to be relieved, furious, or both, but I was definitely shocked, and I’m not sure if it’s a good or bad thing, again depends on the person. But all in all this book was amazing! It left me with so many thoughts and new realizations as I really got to know the main character and her experiences. I also loved the writing style, it was as if SHE was telling ME the story. Amazing foreshadowing as well, the suspense kept me on the edge of my seat. Marvelous 🤯👏🏾❤️

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Beautiful!!

This story was so amazing! I cried so many times. This story was truly touching and had a captivating plot, perfectly flawed characters, and a beautiful lesson. I really enjoyed the unique flaws given to the characters and the inner turmoil created from those circumstances and conditions. I also loved the drama of it and the persistence and dedication of the protagonists. This story also made me aware of how serious and da,aging mental disorders can be and as someone who used to jock and say “ yea she’s like, bipolar” I feel truly enlightened to how serious it actually is and would like to apologize to anyone with mental conditions. I absolutely loved this story much and suggest to anyone who likes drama. The smut wasn’t so good near the end though. 😭👏🏾❤️❤️

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OMG!

This story was just spectacular! Everything about it was amazing and the plot was just EXPLOSIVE! Never a dull moment in this story. This had me on the edge of my seat the entire time! I love the character development as well, the turmoil, the internal conflict, the external conflict, the DRAMA! This story was truly a pleasure to read, the only critique I have is that the grammar was a little confusing like it took me a while to figure out that you meant doubt when you wrote dough. Other than that this is one of the best stories iv'e ever has the pleasure of reading, character consistency and relationship development was amazing and the smut was spot on.

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Very Nice!

This is a short book mostly explaining the past events, I like the third person/2nd person point of view. I like how even though its a very short story the plot is big,and how I still get to know the characters. I read it in like less than an hour, and In no way was this story lacking. Wish there was more smut, or the smut was more dirty hehe. Other than that this was a very pleasant short read. I recommend to anyone wanting to get a nice consistent story with a good plot and a little smut. ❤👌🏾

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WOW

This book was just a roller coaster of emotions. I have never been so interested in a book. I absolutely love how unique the characters, perspective, and events are. It was so fascinating to read about a gay relationship especially because there aren't many books depicting such things, at least not for guys. You POV writing was spot on, i could really feel and see what Kason was feeling and seeing. The characters were amazing, and the details-THE DETAILS, AMAZING. I got to know each character and their personalities. Not to mention that smut had me at church, stealing holy water (soo good). The whole thing was realistic, consistent, and deserves to be a TV series. Like, where is the sequel?! ❤❤👏🏾😍

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INCREDIBLE!!

OMG this book was so amazing! The plot was so GOOD, the way it was planned out and written really brought the story to life. I especially love the internal conflict of the characters and the turmoil. The conflict between characters was equally thrilling but we'er all living for the moment when they express their pent up feelings. The suspense especially always had me coming back. BEAUTIFUL!!!❤👏🏾

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AMAZING!

This was such an amazing book! I absolutely love the thrilling plot and twisted characters. I love how the personalities of the characters stayed consistent and were well developed. Very thrilling and exciting book with good smut. GREAT JOB!!👌🏾😆

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Pretty good.

The grammar and word choice was off, it just wasn't it. The plot was also patchy like there were literal holes. How did the main characters relationship progress so quickly? How did the bad guy all of a sudden find them. The whole thing lacked exposition. I suggest adding that next time to your stories. Really pay attention to developing the characters story correctly in a way that makes sense. The way its written makes it seem like they were just doing their own things, then POOF! love, drama, death, forever. ???? It was almost like their relationship materialized out of thin air. Details details details, needs more of that, details about the room behind the white door, about the girls past, about the guys past, about the bad guys past, and about both of their personalities. Other than that stuff it was a very good story! I enjoyed it

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SO CUTE!

This was such an amazing story! i love the plot of it being a summer romance. I especially love the drama, and all the steamy scenes. Great Job!!

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fantastic

I absolutely love the concept of this book. I love the diversity of it as well. the story was beautifully written and easy so understand it just captured me from the very beginning, honestly that was one hell of a hook sentence. The nerd getting the cheerleader AND being friend with his sort of bully best friend jock was just backwards, and, I, LOVED IT!!! The only critique is to put more effort into the entries, as a diary writer myself the entries that Arnold wrote seemed a little brief and detached, when i write in my journal its like im pouring my heart out to a best friend. The entries were also few and far apart with him leaving out events that someone might think noteworthy in their diary, So next time maybe more emotion or feeling from Arnold in his journal. Other than that please make a whole nerd series and publish it, i can see it now.....The nerd diaries.GOLD!! Great job!

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Deliciously Intriguing!

This is Such a great book! I absolutely love the concept and the plot! I also love how even though the relationship moves quickly, the development makes sense. Such a nice story and the plot is just amazing. and its also something you can extend. BRAVO!!

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Super Cute!

This is such a cheeky story. I like how the main character is the guy you think would never get a girl. Like the geek finally gets the girl story without him having to change himself. I love it! Its a quick read, but not a wasteful one, I would recommend to anybody who likes humorous, books with a bit of steam. No critique except that the cover was a little misleading, i thought he was going to kidnap her or something extreme.

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SO AMAZING!!

This story was absolutely amazing! the plot was so thrilling, and well planned. I love how I could really fell the emotions of the characters. This book it perfect for anyone who loves drama and romance...the DRAMA! this story was enthralling, I just didn't want it to end. I love the character development and consistency. The internal turmoil was so captivating! had me coming back for more! Well Done!!

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Your writing style is so amazing. I could really connect with the story and the characters. The details were SOOOO GOOOD. The way you wrote the story made it so easy to become lost in the fantastical world of August and Jezebel. Truly a beautiful story. I found myself crying at certain times throughout it as well. I cant offer any critique because as far as i'm concerned, you don't need any. Absolutely amazing. I myself aspire to be an author one day and your writing skills and technique has really helped me. BRAVO
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SO GREAT

Have someone proofread and edit it before hand next time. Other than the grammar and punctuation the story was very well planned and thought out. Maybe a bit more personality and motives for the antagonist /villains next time. Though all of the main characters were really personalized and have very consistent and well thought out personalities. I loved this story and was a little hesitant at first to read it but the way you wrote it really captured my attention and I like that you didn't have many fillers but still had that great exposition. Everything felt so real and I was really able to connect with the characters and understand them. You truly brought this story to life and it was Beautiful! new account

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Beautiful

This was such a nice book of poems. I absolutely love the word usage and how everything rhymes. Everything about the poems was soulful, I could feel what the author was conveying in the poems, some almost made me cry—almost! Lol. this would be perfect for anyone who likes beautiful, meaningful poems. It’s a quick read but not a wasteful one. Beautiful 👏🏾👏🏾❤️❤️

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Needs some adjustments

Disclaimer: review is not meant to antagonize or bully, just MY opinion and some constructive criticism.
I was reading the reviews and it seems like everyone loved the book but I don’t agree with some stuff....for an example I found the whole plot to be...to say he least confusing. For instance, the relationship with the father and daughter, that relationship should be better expressed for the readers to understand, POV are very helpful in understanding the characters. Though I did like the exposition of the dead mother and the scandal and stuff. Also I feel like the relationship between the alpha reed and his mate the girl was so random. Like how did they get so close? When and why did he start calling her baby? Why was he rude before and then sweet and sugary the next moment? And wasn’t he supposed to be tough and brooding? The relationship between them literally had NO development WHATSOEVER. Details, details details, that’s a big thing for me I feel you didn’t deliver on that. Also the character personalities are not consistent. It seems the girl is feisty and defiant, but then she all of a sudden has this super submissive almost shy vibe in the way the does stuff in the book sometimes. I stopped at chapter 11 because I felt the book wasn’t holding my attention, like there was too much filling, and I know by stopping there I didn’t really give you a chance but I saw how many chapters were left and I was like “ this ain’t worth my time”
I suggest reading Fever claim by Leila vy, it’s on inkitt and very similar to your story except the main characters relationship development makes sense. I read this book while i was taking a break from yours. I like the concept of your story and I think it could’ve even much better with some modifications. Maybe take notes from fever claim? Idk I’m not telling you what to do just making a suggestion. Thank you so much for writing and I will be looking into your other stories.

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So beautiful

I absolutely love this novel! I loved the plot, and how I could feel see and see everything in my mind, the story was beautifully told. I especially appreciate the character development and the details in all the scenes! (Especially the naughty ones) hehehe. I felt that turmoil, and loved how the relationship between rosemary and Judah developed, it was so romantic. I also appreciate your consistency in the characters personality as well as there development in such. Like how Judah started off an ass, and ended a lesser ass? GOLD! Very well written and executed. Bravo!❤️👏🏾👏🏾

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Exceptionally intriguing

This series just keeps getting better and better, I’m literally on the edge of my seat. The author never fails to deliver a captivating plot and well developed characters, in any of her books! This is one of the best series I’ve ever read and I’m am looking forward to reading the rest of the series, literally CANT wait! I recommend this book to anyone who likes to read erotica with drama and mild BDSM. I also recommend it to anyone who has good taste! I’m so excited!❤️❤️

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Excellent

I absolutely loved this book! (I read the whole thing a while back and thought I’d review)I absolutely loved all the suspense, you (the author) really had me at the edge of my seat the whole time. I had so many questions! And I absolutely love how much the characters develop mostly the victim daughter( forgot her name) she is so strong like I knew she was and this story is like a badass, sexy, exciting, dangerous version of Romeo and Juliet! BEAUTIFUL! This book is perfect for anyone who loves twisted, suspenseful, thrilling plots and happy endings. Sure as hell wasn’t easy to get to the ending they did, but the whole story was so raw and real I’m honestly waiting for the movie. Excellent work👏🏾👌🏾❤️❤️

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Just extravagant!

This was so amazing! The plot, the characters the everything, all of it had me on the edge of my seat the entire time! The grammar mistakes were plentiful though, it’s fine for me as long as the plot is good and the details were on point, the grammar isn’t such a problem as long as I can read it. Also speaking of details you were lacking a bit concerning the characters, I still don’t know any physical characteristics about the Triplet brother kings expect for the color of their eyes. I would very much like to know the hair, eye, skin, color etc....of ALL the characters. Other than grammar and the character depth details, this story is so extravagant, I absolutely love how everything about the plot connects and is well thought out. Very well planned and written, this is a must read for all fantasy, erotica, and drama fanatics out there. I’m so excited for the sequel too. Just beautiful! Well done!

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Spectacular!

Such a good story! This is the perfect story to binge short but not too short. The only criticism have to offer is that I feel the details weren’t enough I kinda wanted more exposition, a deeper look into the characters lives. I also feel that all, not just some of the erotic scenes should have been well detailed and expressed in the story. The punctuation and grammar was pretty good, though a few mistakes, minor really but it honestly doesn’t bother me I just overlook it, I can barley punctuate or spell myself most of the time, autocorrect is my bestie. Other than that stuff the story was phenomenal! The plot, the characters, the emotions, you really kept me hooked the entire time, so amazing! Can’t wait for the second book!

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Amazing

I absolutely loved how I could tell they had English accents partially from the writting style. Also I liked how some of the words, objects and clothes used in the story specified to a time period. Easy to understand, and the plot was MAGNIFICENT! So cool how all the events in the story are connected and mean something in the end. All of the characters were so well developed, and I like that their personalities stayed consistent. Beautifully written story, and truly whimsical. Love it.

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Awsome

I saw that the review stars arent accurate for this amazing story, this deserves 5 stars!❤

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Very nice

This story was not what I expected. It was very confusing at times and didn’t really have a good flow. Though I have to admit the beautiful details and gripping plot, made up for that. Such a nice story, though I felt like there needed to be more at the end and I’m still unclear wether or not there is a continuation of this story in another book, like a sequel. I suggest having someone proof read your books or chapters before, that way you can straighten out everything that was unclear for the readers. It may have been clear for you and made sense in your head (author) but I was a little lost at times, and I’m not the only one. In the comments of some chapters people were asking questions like “what!?” But other than that stuff, it was soooo good, you really had me till the end. AWESOME WORK!👌🏾❤️

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