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Cupid's heart

There are too many grammar errors that make the story hard to read and enjoy. You should consider editing it once or twice and then re-posting. Also, the plot moves too fast without explaining a lot of things. I'd suggest slowing it down a bit.

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The girl who lived in the shadow

An interesting mystery. The interconnection between the two girls, Hana and Monica, is nicely set up and very intriguing. Small town murder suspense that can unfold into a great story.

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Good worldbuilding

I liked the worldbuilding at the beginning. I particularly enjoyed the little tidbits of greek mythology. It took me a while to get all the names straight, but as I kept reading it got easier. There weren't any noticeable grammar or punctuation errors. One thing I'd suggest is to separate your dialogue bits when 2 different characters speak.

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Ray of sunshine

Some suggestions to the author:
1. The world building is a bit flat. You should consider enriching your descriptions.
2. Your chapters are too small and it doesn't make sense how you separate them. They don't move the plot forward.
3. A lot of punctuation and grammar mistakes. You should consider an online editor.

All these made it quite difficult to follow and enjoy the story. Perhaps a good edit can change all that.
Keep up the hard work!

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Nice plot!

I enjoyed reading this story. Plot wise, it was really interesting and it had many twists. You can't even decide who you want the love interest to be, yet. The only thing that I'd consider in need of fixing is the cousins that keep coming out of nowhere. It's like you invented them just to get the protagonist out of difficult situations, and then gave them a backstory as an afterthought. That's how I read it, anyway.
For the technical part, a few punctuation mistakes and some sentences which need shortening.
A lot of potential for this story!

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Interesting

The story has an interesting beginning, especially the one with the police station at the very first lines. There are a few grammar mistakes. One thing I suggest is to separate the dialogue bits. When different people speak, it shouldn't be in the same paragraph. Keep up the good work!

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Destined to the Alpha

The story started to turn good only halfway through. For the first half, I wasn't overly fond of how spineless Jade was when it came to Jordan. In general, I don't enjoy the books that have the characters just falling in love because of a mate bond without even knowing each other. It screams manipulation to me. That being said, when she started getting her own powers the story was nice. If you edit a few technical errors it'd be even better!

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Mr. Nerd

The story is promising and the double identity intriguing. There are a lot of technical mistakes, though, that make the chapters hard to read. For one thing, you should consider shortening your sentences instead of jumbling everything together. Your grammar needs a bit of work, too. Keep up the good work!

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Beautiful scars

The story was really interesting, with an intense romance and a good mystery. However, there are quite a few technical mistakes, especially grammar ones, that make the text kind of difficult to read, hence the 3 stars. With a good edit, the book could become great!

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Good story

The story starts with an interesting twist. Emotions are well described. Keep it up!

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Great!

The story has some really good descriptions. The world-building and the mythology behind it are pretty great, too. The pace quick and providing as much info as necessary to keep it interesting. I really enjoyed this!

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Blood love

I can't really judge your story's plot based on one chapter, but it seems interesting. Technically, you should give it a good edit since there are quite a few mistakes. Also, I suggest to shorten your sentences instead of overusing commas. Keep up the good work!

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Cassandra

I did not enjoy the plot of the story. All characters, Jan especially, were unlikable. Technically, it was good enough. I'd suggest to shorten your paragraphs and try not to use too much dialogue.

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North AMerican Werewolves

The story was okay, although it had a plot hole that put me off almost from the start. The romance between the protagonists was too abrupt. In fact, I wouldn't even call it romance, considering that they just announced to her that she's the king's mate while she had just learned about werewolves, and she just accepted that and they got together. Also, she was the chosen mate of one of his friends who just handed her over like a piece of meet. These two facts made it unable for me to read further, I'm afraid.

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Basterone

The story is really interesting and it starts with a kick that would hook me in if there weren't so many technical mistakes. Your words get jumbled up a lot and it's a bit confusing. With a good edit, the story could be great!

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Coming home to you

I liked the writing style a lot, but the end was a bit too cheesy for my tastes. The only other issues I found was a tense mix-up, where simple present turned to past present within the same paragraph. A couple of typos as well. Other than that, the whole experimenting thing and a strong female character were really interesting.

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Good dynamics

The dynamics between the characters hook you in right from the start. Great beginning and well written. Keep this up!

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No connection

Your plot is a bit confusing. You should consider defining the timeline a little bit better. Also, I didn't feel any connection between your protagonists. The female character especially was really unlikable. It just didn't make any sense, her obsession with Max. I'd suggest to strengthen their background and motivations.
A few technical errors as well.

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Sorry

I'm so sorry but I didn't manage to finish reading your uploaded chapters. There are severe issues with the English language that make the book unreadable and the plot chaotic. I didn't get what the plot was supposed to be about.
I'd suggest combing through it. As it is now, it needs a lot of editing.

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Kara

I enjoy the story so far. The strong female character is a big plus. Keep those chapters coming!

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Good plot

I liked the plot of the story. However, you should consider shortening your sentences and using punctuation to make it easier to read. The dragon character was a nice touch. With a good editing, your story could turn out great!

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Good plot

I liked the plot of the story. However, you should consider shortening your sentences and using punctuation to make it easier to read. The dragon character was a nice touch. With a good editing, your story could turn out great!

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Alpha of Aberdeen

The story has potential. The dialogue though felt stilted and I'd suggest to also enrich your descriptions instead of simply narrating what the characters are doing as they''re doing it. It felt like reading from a list. There also are quite a few technical errors. With a good edit it could turn into a nice story.

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Fairytale with a twist

An interesting twist of a popular fairytale. The timeline, though, is a bit confusing, as is how the protagonists travel from one universe to another using the carpet. Character depth and motivation could also use a little bit more work.
Keep up the good work!

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Love it!

I love the story so far! Your characters and the dynamics between them are really interesting. The only thing I'd suggest is to make Suri's motivation when she change's her mind at the first chapter stronger. It seems unreal that people that much depressed decide to live on a whim.
I'm eagerly waiting for the next chapters.

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Check the tenses

The story could be made more enjoyable if you work on the tenses. Present simple suddenly becomes past simple, and sometimes within the same sentence. Keep up the good work!

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Demon's of my heart

A very interesting theme and some very good descriptions at the beginning to set up the scene. Keep up the good work!

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Needs editing

A lot of technical errors, especially regarding English and grammar, that made the work hard to read. I'd suggest a few rounds of editing. Keep up the effort!

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Red Woods

The mystery created with the dream sequence was interesting. I felt though that there were too many dialogue bits. You should try to be a bit more descriptive, especially emotionally. Also, the summary should allude to the paranormal aspect of the story.

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Time to play

I found the stories simply describing acts, and not stirring any emotions. They fell a little flat to me. Also, the 2nd person POV of the last chapter was a bit unusual and threw me off. The stories were well edited though, with only a couple typos.

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Her alpha, his omega

I enjoyed this story, It was well written and edited. My only suggestion is to shorten the chapters as they can get tiresome. Keep up the good work!

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Fallen crown

I wasn't very fond of the POV changes inside the same chapter. May I suggest keeping each chapter to one person's POV, or write from the POV of an all-knowing narrator? There were a few typos and technical errors as well. The plot could have potential with a bit more explanations, like the German that keep popping up.

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Brimstone

I really enjoyed this story as it was well written. The mystery was interesting and the main character was well plotted-out. Keep up the good work!

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Rouge or rogue?

I'm not really sure about the use of the word 'rouge'. Perhaps it's 'rogue' instead? Other than that, there are quite a few technical mistakes in it, too. The story, though, could be really powerful.

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Shows promise

The story has a lot of promise. What I'd suggest is to try and make the descriptions a bit more colorful instead of simply narrating facts. A few repetitive words, like ''king'' which shows up a lot, need a way around them. A few grammar mistakes as well. The story could do with another edit. I also suggest a hook-me-in chapter at first, before jumping to what is basically an outline of the story. At least that's what works for me as a reader.

3 stars overall!

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