kookiesandkream

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my, my, my. i just keep allowing myself to be sucked into your stories. i can't help myself! i adored the plot, once again. the entire "alter ego" with the main character regarding her job was ENTIRELY relatable. i did like that yoongi was also included in the story, just as much as hoseok was, even if the entire idea was to focus on the relationship between the reader (main character) and hoseok. you had many people craving yoongi fan-fictions afterwards, haha. anywho! the part that kind of confused me, was the way that you were slowly "unmasking" hobi. the way he turned into an entirely different person. it was left open for interpretation and that's lovely and all, but i was left more confused than imaginative. long story short, this was very pleasant to read. i'll definitely add it to my list of things to come back to, as i enjoy re-reading.

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this story was absolutely gorgeous! i adored the plot, i don't see an awful lot of "good" doll stories, so i'm pleasantly surprised with this one. i'll have to say, what a game changer the doll to human flesh chapters were! it was fresh, and i didn't expect it, so i have to give you generous credit for that. overall, it was amazing, i enjoyed reading it.

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Over Again.

The book was great. It captured each emotion from each perspective perfectly and made me feel them as well. You described each moment beautifully and never repeated yourself or brought your story to the edge of possibly being "boring." I admired the change in Jimin, as his assumptions soon led him to nearly giving up, he came to his senses, and not many authors portray their characters in such a mature way. I'll have to admit, I was a bit confused about the perspectives from Jimin, (which was in third person) and "y/n" (or, _, which was in first person.) given the fact that there was not a specific time frame or warning regarding the switch. Overall, I really enjoyed the story and you are extremely talented.

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