Kris E-Unit Rumbut

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A fantastic read

Excellent story and character development. It is enjoyable beginning to end. It would be a perfect read for young adults sans the well endowed elf/half breed elf innuendos (kidding). I only have one concern about the whole of the novel. The conclusion tapers off and does not leave any satisfaction as to the long term fates of the main characters and kingdoms. The novel definitely needs an epilogue, or possibly a hint to a second book,

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Excellent plot.

This story has great potential, but needs lots of work when it comes to sentence structure. There are run-on sentences and punctuation errors throughout, Was this perhaps translated from another language? It needs a thorough proofreading by a third party. All of the errors take away from the flow of the story.

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