Kris N

Sunny California

I am a writer by heart and I enjoy writing. I've been told that my stories are entertaining and I hope that everyone enjoys them.

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Nice short story!

I know this was short and for the contest, but you did a great job of getting in a whole story in just over 10k words!

This also has potential to expand and add more to it if you wanted - rework some things, add more killings, etc but it doesn't need anything else as it tells a complete story just how it is.

I think you did a great job in writing and getting everything across to the reader. It was enjoyable to read. Keep up the good work!

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