Kris L. Dark

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Detailed

This book reminds me of Jane Eyre. The intricate details in every sentence is masterful and inspiring. The story is very interesting and different. It makes me want to read more. Although it was difficult to understand what was going on in some parts because of those details and you have to really read it to know what is going on, it got better.
Maybe I got use to the writing style or it was just easier to read in the later chapter, who knows. All in all, the imagery is beautiful, something you only get from published books. I can't wait to read more

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Fantastic fantasy

I loved every minute reading the book. I have read it twice and I still could not put it down. I hope you write more because your way of story telling is really good. I didn't like the ending but it was still a great ending. The kind the makes your heart hurt and makes you angry. I highly recommend it to anyone that wants something different to read and like fantasy or adventure..

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Different and interesting

I like this book. It is different and interesting. The story itself is great because its a quest, it could go on for however long you want it to and it wouldn't get boring. It has tons of references and connction to fanasty games like dungeons and dragons. If you don't understand that kind of stuff, the author explains it really well so that you can still enjoy the book. Its something i wouldn't find my reading and liking but i did and i can't wait to see what happens next. The only problem i saw were gammer mistakes and the odd why of showing who was taking without any " ". But i still like it, keep doing with your doing!

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Great start

I love the idea and premise of the book. There are some grammer and punctuation issues but that it easy to fix. There are some things to work on, like description and using action words to paint a picture. The frame work is strong and the story is great. I am suspisous of many characters in the story on 'Who killed Mia?' I think there is alot of potential for this book to be amazing, just keep writing and see where it goes from there. Also, I would love to see some twists and turns in the book!

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