Lana0607

Hello! My name is Lana, and I love writing. My Wattpad account is @fluffycat0607. I also love cats, watching anime, and reading. I hope you'll check out my story!

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I loved this!!

This story sounds really good so far, and I’m looking forward to the next chapter. Though I noticed a few grammar errors, it was nothing too major. I hope you update soon!!

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Great Story!

Hello there! I really enjoyed reading your story. The concept was very interesting, and I especially enjoyed the way you wrote the prologue in poem form. It really drew me in. The only really grammar errors that I found were a few extra commas, so kudos! You have a great story going!

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Amazing!!!

I loved your poetry! It had such a lovely ring to it, and the rhyming added such a nice touch. I thought you conveyed ideas really well through the poems, and I look forward to reading more!!

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I really enjoyed this story, and was drawn in by the dialogue of the characters. Though I was confused at a few parts, the author clearly has a very good understanding of grammar, and I'm very excited to continue reading!
-Lana

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Hello! I thought that your story had a very interesting plot, and I've thoroughly enjoyed reading it so far. That being said, I did find quite a few grammar errors. I pointed out several of them to you in feedback (which you should get an email or notification about). I would suggest being more careful with your use of punctuation, as well as tense. I did notice a few misuses of adverbs, but that wasn't too big of a deal.

Besides that, I thought it was a great story! I hope you continue to write it (^-^)

-Lana

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