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This book was fascinating, emotional, moving, impressive. I loved the intricate way Eric moved around the edges of Sal's life, the wonder of Boone's caring presence, the views of Half Moon Bay. The only thing that reconciled me to having Boone end was the idea that it's the start of a series of books, Yay!! I have a few comments on your mechanics, maybe because you wrote too fast to think about them. I'm going to put those into a message to you on Review group page. Basically, you need to use the Word grammar checker as a backup proofreader if you can. The piece flows like honey but every so often there's a glitch. You don't want that, I'm sure. But the book is awesome and should be made into a movie just like Sal's novel in the book. Keep writing, for heaven's sake!