Lauren Phillips

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Great story

I love this story. It was very well written with only a few spelling mistakes, pretty easily ignored. The scenes were well described and easily imagined. The hotel scene with the love triangle is the only part I didn't really enjoy, just because that is not my cup of tea and I found it strange. Other than that, plotline was great and well executed with plenty of character development and mystery to keep things interesting. Well done.

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