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Good writing style

I like your plot and writing style however you should try to look out for grammar and editing mistakes such as missing words and run on sentences but other than that great work!

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Very well written

This is not my usual genre and yet it kept me hooked from the beginning through to the end nice job!

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Wow!

I love the plot of this haunting story. The book captures your attention from the beginning and holds it right through to the end. Keep up the great work!

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Wow

Wow! This author is very talented, the book is very well written and captures your attention right away. I love the plot of this story, keep up the great work!

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Amazing plot and writing style!

I love how this book is written, I felt as though I was in the book while reading it. The characters are very relatable emotionally, I felt connected to Kayla, the main character as I read through her rollercoaster of a story! Overall this is an amazing read with amazing descriptions that allow the reader to immerse themselves into the book as if going through the characters journey themselves.

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Good work so far

I like your writing style and I’m very intrigued by the plot, the story hooked me from the start although it does need some editing, this is an overall really great story!

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Amazing Character development

I appreciate your attention to detail when it comes to your character development, I felt as though I was emotionally connected to your main characters which is so so important. amazing work!

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Amazing

I love the plot of this novel I was hooked from the beginning amazing job!

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Wow

That was thrilling like I could actually see everything going on and it was amazing. The plot was genius, I love this.

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Great concept

I love this concept I’ve always been a sucker for story’s that involve alternate realities in relation to dreaming. I love how this book was written great idea!

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Love the plot

The plot of this story is amazing, the book is overall very well written and hooked me from the beginning through to the end! Well done!

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Nice job

I like the plot of this story although I believe there needs to be more of a beginning to introduce the first chapter better.

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Goo plot

I like the plot of this story, however the writing style and grammar needs improvement as some sentences are hard to understand and are not written as properly.

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Amazing plot

I love the plot of this novel, I love how intricate it is and how it just captures your attention from the very beginning. This is an amazing story.

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Love

I absolutely love this plot, this book is not for the faint of heart and is right up my ally. I would highly recommend reading this book.

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Great writing style

I would not ordinarily have read this book as it is not my usual genre, however this story was very interesting to read, I didn’t get bored while reading this once which tends to be a fairly big problem for me. Amazing work!

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Keep going!

You have a really good start here, the grammar and writing style needs improvement but the plot is overall pretty good keep going practice makes perfect!

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Love love love!

I absolutely adored this novel, it pulls you in and keeps your attention with the amazing plot and writing style. I love this idea, can’t wait to see what this author comes up with next!

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Great writing

This book is very attention grabbing, it sucks you in from the beginning and you won’t want to stop. I thoroughly enjoyed reading this work of art, well done!

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Amazing writing style

This novel is so intriguing, the descriptions are crystal clear and I was easily able to picture them in my mind. I am so excited to see what is in store for this book!

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Amazing !

Wow this is very well written, I was able to easily picture what was going on in my head and I was hooked from the beginning, I can’t wait to see see what happens next!

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Wow!

I really love the plot of this novel it’s so intriguing. The overall story is amazing and very well written. I love this book, highly recommended!

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Wow!

This book is very well written and very intriguing I love the plot of this story, I feel each chapter flows very well together, and I didn’t find myself losing interest at any point while reading this amazing novel. Great work!

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Very interesting

I’m usually more into thrillers and horror so I usually don’t read this style, however this book was very interesting. It held my attention which romance novels normally don’t do, the authors writing style is very good, I can’t wait to read more of this authors work!

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